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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2000-03-20 02:37 AM


        
       *******                   *********
    *************            ***************
   ****************       ********************
* My Love, come to         me,Into thy life,*
*Hold me tenderly,never let thee go,sting thy heart
*with cupids bow,take me to places I have never been
*Places full of loves passion,upon this journey
  *I do embark,where loves passion leaves**
    *its marks,over highs, over lows,over*
      *mountains through valleys,across*
       *the sands and the seas,where***
          *hearts collide,connect side*
            *by side,for all eternity**
              *I enter this realm,
                * this heavenly**
                   *Feeling of***
                    **bliss,*
                      ***
                       *
                      
                      
                    * *
                     *
                     *
                     W
                     H
                     E
                     R
                     E
              *I am amazed,*
                *Dazed by**
                  *your**
                    kiss
                     **
              

          Loves' journey has many paths,
          Many courses one must choose,
           Upon many you may loose,

      But one will come who will stand out from the rest..
                Into the night,
                Into the day,
                Words of passion,
                Words of play,

          As I embark upon Loves'Quest!

        


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 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare



[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-20-2000).]

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Cypher
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 17

1 posted 2000-03-20 01:40 PM


Romantic Heart, I like the format of this poem.  Great wording.  Good luck on your quest.

Cypher

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-03-20 04:05 PM


Beautifully passionate poem!

Denise

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2000-03-20 05:58 PM


Cy-thank you for your comments!Welcome to passions,

Dee-Thank you too!!!!This is my escape and fantasy world!!!helps ya know!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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