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The God you give.....

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The Jackal
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0 posted 03-20-2000 02:23 AM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

where did you get those empty eyes
i have to know
so i can get a pair of my own
and what do you do with broken lies
im curious..curious to the bone
some say the god you own
is the god you give
show me the lesson here
there IS more to life than just fear.....
for me the need is always just to disappear...
© Copyright 2000 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Cypher
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1 posted 03-20-2000 01:43 PM       View Profile for Cypher   Email Cypher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cypher

Jackal
I'm surprised nobody's replied to this yet.  Great job.  There's a LOT more to life than fear.  Would be scary if that wasn't true.  
-Cypher
Ravenlearns2fly
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2 posted 03-20-2000 05:14 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

Jackal
Fear is a teacher learn his teachings well.
Great poam!!!!
Raven

 
Janet Marie
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3 posted 03-20-2000 08:21 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

i know I already replied to this in dp...but i wanted another read of this perfect poem  
take care,jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman


Denise
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4 posted 03-20-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well written, Jackal, you have some good thoughts in here worth pondering.

Denise
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