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Circus o' Fleas (written with WhtDove with ease)

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 03-20-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

The fleas went a jumpin
Oh this way and that
Started scratchin my head
One got under my hat

So you view this stranger guy
Scratching head the big ninny
I do sayeth! “Fleas right here!”
Tho’ just might not see any  

Grab them magnifiers
C’mon and see the show
My fleas are a jumpin
And each day they will grow

So under the big top spy
A marv'less three ring event
The fleas for me work for free
Shh! They think they’ll get a cent

They jump over hurdles
Go through hoops with such ease
And all get together
For the flying trapeze

They all have pretty voices
Time for opera o' the fleas
But when its smoke break time
They bustin' out the Misty’s

The reward they will get
When the show is then over
They’ll have a mighty feast
On my ole pal Rover

Sigh, Rover is on the lam
Now they perform major sights
Rover he charges two bits
And the fleas are paid two bites!

this was fun she wrote every other stanza starting with the first one yuh!



OH YUH!

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1 posted 03-20-2000 01:59 AM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

Nice work.   *brings in the flea bath*
Mistikman
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2 posted 03-20-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

yea, wayoutwalt does rule, heh, great work guys  
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3 posted 03-20-2000 02:22 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

W.O.W. and WhiteDove~

Just too cool !
You both rule !
Just a flea bag
and a fool !

Yadda yadda !
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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4 posted 03-20-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

A flea here, a flea there
You two, noone can compare

My head I'm now starting to scratch
As for this subject I just can't match

EXCELLENT
Where's the flea powder  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
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5 posted 03-20-2000 07:51 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Deftlea done my friends..
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6 posted 03-20-2000 11:16 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is delightful, you two!! You write very well together!!  

Denise
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 03-20-2000 04:20 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

so we think alike hehehe i wonder what whtdove would say about that i dunno i rather like the idea hehehehe..thanx guys
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8 posted 03-20-2000 09:59 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

What would I say? NO WAY!  hahah j/k Walt! Anytime  
Michael
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9 posted 03-22-2000 02:21 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

I'm gonna be itchin' and scratchin' all night now....great compilation you two!

Michael
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