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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-03-20 01:43 AM


The fleas went a jumpin
Oh this way and that
Started scratchin my head
One got under my hat

So you view this stranger guy
Scratching head the big ninny
I do sayeth! “Fleas right here!”
Tho’ just might not see any  

Grab them magnifiers
C’mon and see the show
My fleas are a jumpin
And each day they will grow

So under the big top spy
A marv'less three ring event
The fleas for me work for free
Shh! They think they’ll get a cent

They jump over hurdles
Go through hoops with such ease
And all get together
For the flying trapeze

They all have pretty voices
Time for opera o' the fleas
But when its smoke break time
They bustin' out the Misty’s

The reward they will get
When the show is then over
They’ll have a mighty feast
On my ole pal Rover

Sigh, Rover is on the lam
Now they perform major sights
Rover he charges two bits
And the fleas are paid two bites!

this was fun she wrote every other stanza starting with the first one yuh!

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OH YUH!


© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2000-03-20 01:59 AM


Nice work.   *brings in the flea bath*

Mistikman
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2 posted 2000-03-20 02:00 AM


yea, wayoutwalt does rule, heh, great work guys  
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3 posted 2000-03-20 02:22 AM


W.O.W. and WhiteDove~

Just too cool !
You both rule !
Just a flea bag
and a fool !

Yadda yadda !
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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4 posted 2000-03-20 02:32 AM


A flea here, a flea there
You two, noone can compare

My head I'm now starting to scratch
As for this subject I just can't match

EXCELLENT
Where's the flea powder  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Nan
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5 posted 2000-03-20 07:51 AM


Deftlea done my friends..
Denise
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6 posted 2000-03-20 11:16 AM


This is delightful, you two!! You write very well together!!  

Denise

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
7 posted 2000-03-20 04:20 PM


so we think alike hehehe i wonder what whtdove would say about that i dunno i rather like the idea hehehehe..thanx guys
WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-03-20 09:59 PM


What would I say? NO WAY!  hahah j/k Walt! Anytime  
Michael
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9 posted 2000-03-22 02:21 AM


I'm gonna be itchin' and scratchin' all night now....great compilation you two!

Michael

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