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Stuck? ....not for long
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Stuck? ....not for long |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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I wanna day dream, I wanna soar Seems my feet Are stuck to the floor I cant get off this sticky ground so I stand still just lookin round Dreary days bring Dreary hearts Bummer moods Soar off the charts I think it's time For this to end My rainbow's Right around the bend |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dat's the spirit, Dovey!! Go for that pot of gold!. I'll be cheering ya on  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel, this is great, I absolutley love it and it flows so nicely. Well Done Girl!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
*reaches up into the clouds and pulls a brightly colored rainbow down from the heavens above. Places it in your hands, White Dove* Yep, you deserve it and it's right around the bend there! Beautiful poem! -molly aka sam < !signature--> Fleeting World "Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world: A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream; A flash of lightning in a summer cloud, A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream." -from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield [This message has been edited by MyPenNameIsSam (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Balladeer my cheerleader! Where's the skirt and pom-poms eh?  Thank ya, thank ya DA! Well, thanks much Molly! I could use one of those rainbows! How very sweet, just for me  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhiteDove~ Hitch your wagon to a star ! Go for it ! Love the uplifted spirit ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Great!! Keep smilin', my friend... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Marge thanks, I had to do something cheery around here I am Nan, thanks! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
....and a beautiful rainbow it is! Denise |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem Whitedove! Soar towards your dreams and don't look back. Nathan |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem Whitedove! Soar towards your dreams and don't look back. Nathan |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem Whitedove! Soar towards your dreams and don't look back. Nathan |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Denise thank you Nate thanks for 3 lovely replies |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Cute one! A lot of spunk in this poem!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Sharon |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
my feets are still stuck t the ground from 3 hrs in this here theater watchin the green mile!! good stuff dove! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
No m'dear, your last stanza is wrong. Your rainbow isn't around the bend you ARE the rainbow. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL Walt! Could've been a life time bud  Chris, your words so sweet you make me Thanks Chris for such a sweet compliment |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
*hunts for the crow bar to get you unstuck and lends you her wings so you can fly* I like this |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Ruth! Almost there, I'm almost free! ALRIGHT! Give me those wings, I'm soaring... |
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