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WhtDove
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0 posted 03-20-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

I wanna day dream,
I wanna soar
Seems my feet
Are stuck to the floor

I cant get off
this sticky ground
so I stand still
just lookin round

Dreary days bring
Dreary hearts
Bummer moods
Soar off the charts

I think it's time
For this to end
My rainbow's
Right around the bend
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1 posted 03-20-2000 12:18 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Dat's the spirit, Dovey!! Go for that pot of gold!. I'll be cheering ya on  
Dark Angel
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2 posted 03-20-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Angel, this is great, I absolutley love it and it flows so nicely. Well Done Girl!!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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3 posted 03-20-2000 12:25 AM       View Profile for MyPenNameIsSam   Email MyPenNameIsSam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MyPenNameIsSam

*reaches up into the clouds and pulls a brightly colored rainbow down from the heavens above. Places it in your hands, White Dove*  Yep, you deserve it and it's right around the bend there!  Beautiful poem!
-molly aka sam


 Fleeting World
"Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world:
A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream;
A flash of lightning in a summer cloud,
A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream."
-from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield




[This message has been edited by MyPenNameIsSam (edited 03-20-2000).]
WhtDove
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4 posted 03-20-2000 01:32 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Balladeer my cheerleader! Where's the skirt and pom-poms eh?  

Thank ya, thank ya DA!  

Well, thanks much Molly! I could use one of those rainbows! How very sweet, just for me  
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5 posted 03-20-2000 02:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

WhiteDove~
Hitch your wagon to a star !
Go for it !
Love the uplifted spirit !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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6 posted 03-20-2000 07:34 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Great!! Keep smilin', my friend...
WhtDove
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7 posted 03-20-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Marge thanks, I had to do something cheery around here  

I am Nan, thanks!  
Denise
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8 posted 03-20-2000 04:11 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

....and a beautiful rainbow it is!  

Denise
Nate Dogg
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9 posted 03-20-2000 04:29 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Great poem Whitedove! Soar towards your dreams and don't look back.

 Nathan
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10 posted 03-20-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Great poem Whitedove! Soar towards your dreams and don't look back.


 Nathan
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11 posted 03-20-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Great poem Whitedove! Soar towards your dreams and don't look back.


 Nathan
WhtDove
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12 posted 03-20-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Denise thank you  

Nate thanks for 3 lovely replies  
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13 posted 03-20-2000 11:27 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Cute one! A lot of spunk in this poem!  
WhtDove
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14 posted 03-21-2000 10:21 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks Sharon  
wayoutwalt
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15 posted 03-21-2000 10:24 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

my feets are still stuck t the ground from 3 hrs in this here theater watchin the green mile!! good stuff dove!
Christopher
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16 posted 03-21-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

No m'dear, your last stanza is wrong. Your rainbow isn't around the bend you ARE the rainbow.
WhtDove
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17 posted 03-22-2000 12:03 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

LOL Walt!  Could've been a life time bud  

Chris, your words so sweet you make me  
Thanks Chris for such a sweet compliment  
hoot_owl_rn
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18 posted 03-22-2000 10:46 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

*hunts for the crow bar to get you unstuck and lends you her wings so you can fly*

I like this  
WhtDove
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19 posted 03-22-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks Ruth! Almost there, I'm almost free!  ALRIGHT! Give me those wings, I'm soaring...
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