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Searching for Wonder--Challenge #6

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Sven
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0 posted 03-19-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

The stars glistened above a still, silent sea
     She walked along the shore, a woman alone
Another romance ended, no one to blame but she
     Still searching, searching for that love not known.

All she's ever wanted was someone to love
     Someone Wonderous to share and fill her life
Someone that would be a perfect fit, like a glove
     And take her heart away from this strife.

So now she walks alone, barefoot in the sand
     Searching for the one to fill the hole in her heart
The healing touch of a lover's hand
     She will find him, and make a new start.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



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1 posted 03-19-2000 11:19 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"Someone that would be a perfect fit, like a glove"

...a beautiful line...lovely poem, Sven.

~ Claire
    
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2 posted 03-19-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sven,
Good thoughts, good words, good poem.
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3 posted 03-19-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Is that a promise?
(you are a big, beating, heart, Sven)  I treasure this...
Marina
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4 posted 03-19-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

If it's possible to imagine Sven...I'm speechless!

Marina
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5 posted 03-20-2000 11:35 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Lovely poem, Sven.  I like the rhyme and the beach theme.  Speaks to me....

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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6 posted 03-28-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for dhuron   Email dhuron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit dhuron's Home Page   View IP for dhuron

Sven excellent Poem.  You met this challenge with ease. Good Job

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson

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7 posted 03-30-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Look what I found! A treasure! Good one..  
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