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A Memory
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A Memory |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
A MemoryThe scent is you. The fabric touches my face, my heart. Breathe. Breathe. I try to burrow in to it. Your fingers curl around the shape of my face... breathe. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Claire~ Breathless memories ... brought to mind another moment ... another time. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I know just what you mean...sigh |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Haven't we all felt this before! Great job Marina |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
How can you say so much in so little so beautifully? Wonderful, Claire. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So little and yet so much. Amazing!! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Such sweet memories, indeed... Lovely, Claire..  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Marge, Martie, Marina, Balladeer, Butterflies, Nan...thanks ALL of you for reading!  ~ Claire |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Those memories are so precious and a real part of the here and now. This is wonderful, Claire. It says so much! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Breath?....how can I when I am nearly breathless afer reading this? |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Got that sufrocating feeling after reading this one, Claire, Brief but powerful. Michael |
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MyPenNameIsSam Member
since 2000-03-06
Posts 94usa |
This is so perfect, Meadow. I've read it over several times now and each time it makes me cry, remembering the many times that I've done the same,...and must remember to breathe. I know that you more than likely do not mean this poem in a sad way... though it brings sadness to my heart anyway. Thank you so much for sharing it. -molly aka sam< !signature--> Fleeting World "Thus shall ye think of all this fleeting world: A star at dawn, a bubble in a stream; A flash of lightning in a summer cloud, A flickering lamp, a phantom, and a dream." -from the Diamond Sutra, translated by : A. F. Price -- found in Teachings of The Buddha, edited by Jack Kornfield [This message has been edited by MyPenNameIsSam (edited 03-21-2000).] |
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Mel~ Junior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 16Gosford, New South Wales, Australia |
wow! What a beautiful, and powerful poem. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I know when we loose someone through death or through love, or maybe they are just gone on a trip, we go to the things that the person wore or laid on to smell them near us! Short and sweet! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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