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Marge Tindal
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Moonglow
~*Marge Tindal*~



Moonglow
bathes the night
with splendorous light
glowing softly in her flight
Amazing wonder doth behold
look a piece of treasured gold
when glancing up, you will see
reflections of a lighted heart
shining down brightly on thee
Moonbeams shared in the
night lasting 'til the
morning light



*A special moment
shared with Helmut Becker
3/19/2000


© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-19-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Marge,

you have a gift for presentation as well as poetry.  Nicely done.

INclan
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Lovely poem, lovely moon, lovely spirit in you...Nice, Marge.
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Marge,

This was simply splendid! You write so amazingly well and convey a long range of emotions. The title is what initially drew me to this to begin with. Well, that and the fact that it was one of yours lol. But the poem itself lived up to the reputation of the poet! Nice job!

AMY            

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~




[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 03-19-2000).]
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INclan~
Thank you for that compliment.
It is not taken lightly.
I hope you can tell that
I LOVE what I do.
If it didn't please anyone else
it would still please me ...
the fact that it does is just
a double-delight.

Serenity~
For just 'a moment in time'
the light is suspended for us to capture.
The spirit of light shines tonight for sure.
Thank you, little one.

Amy~
A chance encounter through e-mail with a
friend had me sending him to look at the
moon that shines down on both of us ...
it just rose in the sky and fell to the page.
Thank you for enjoying it too.
I hope I can always draw you in and
not disappoint you.
~*Marge*~


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As always very good
my friend

 Loneheart
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Marge,
You are just too cool for words...
You amaze me~
Marie~


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And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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Beautiful, Marge...isn't the moon a magical muse?

~ Claire
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Marge this is beautiful, love the moon and you captured it beautifully. And the way you presented it, fantastic hon.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Loneheart~
Thank you, my friend.

Mariee~
Gosh, thank you.

Claire~
She is, indeed !

DarkAngel~
Thank you, hon.  
I hope everyone takes a moment to go
out and look at her in all her evening finery.  She's something to behold.
~*Marge*~




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Absolutely beautiful Marge...I love moonlight.  Exellent work, as always.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~


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A beautiful expression.  I find comfort in knowing that even though I can't see those that I love we share the same moon and stars.
So close yet so far.....
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Helmut Becker? You're sharing the moon with a Helmut Becker?? I'll murder da bum!! Marge, after I've given you the best odes of my life you share the moon with something football players wear on their heads? Is there no justice in this world????  
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Alwye~
Sharing that beautiful light with us all ...
she is a wonder.
So glad you enjoyed.

ButterfliesDC~
She's something else, huh?
And yes ... no matter how far away,
she covers us all in her light.
As if she isn't pretty enough alone,
she goes and places stars in her hair.
Awesome !

Balladeer~
LOL !  LOL !  
You have given me beautiful odes ...
so what's a little moonlight between friends?
LOL !  
Helmut will be pleased to see your ire !
Got me laughing my Balladeer.
Love you just the same ...
go look at the moon and I'll share with you too.  
You just look green with envy !
Oh, stop it ..... you've got my sides splitting with laughter.
~*Marge*~

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"Got to please yourself...".. Somebody said that once, didn't they?..

Nice one, Marge... and Helmut is obviously good inspiration..  
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Nan~
Thanks, Nan.
Between inspiration from Helmut and the glorious light of the moon ...
it wrote itself.
~*Marge*~


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I know I'm late and shame on me
overlooking such good poetry
Such lovely piece of moon we share
And on the other sits Balladeer please be aware
Meanwhile I thank thee for the dedication
And here I stand sending ovation
Thank you dear from within my heart
For this poem in beauty and art
Hugs and Love



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~*Helmut*~
Never too late to
share a smile though
I haven't seen yours
in a long while. Much
love to you my dear
friend. Moonglow
I gladly shared.
~*Marge*~

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what a gorgeous poem and the presentation just increases the enjoyment
I'm new to the poetry forum but look forward to reading more of your poems

Tess  
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I don't know how you do it Marge!  Simply wonderful.

Marina
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Oh, Marge, this is beautiful, the verse and the presentation!

Denise
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How did I miss this beauty?  and me all moony myself...so glad I can say, Yeah!  this moon rocks!!!!
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Hi there... my first reply ever to a poem in Passionate Forums... been wandering around thinking about your poem for a bit, letting it remind me of my own nighttime frolics warmed by the friendly moonglow... thank you for bringing that through a well formatted poem... I enjoyed the personification of Moonglow as a benevolent lady of love with a golden heart... I'd love to see more images of how you picture her...
Look forward to reading more of your work.
                        David
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Tess~
Well, goodness.  I guess I have Helmut to thank again for bringing this one back so you all could enjoy it.
Thank you for your reply.  
I told you that you are gonna like it here !

Marina~
It truly is just 'inspired' on the moment.
Thank you so much for letting me know you
like it.

Denise~
Oh, thank you, hon.

Martie~
LOL @ your 'moony self' !
I figured you must have fallen asleep
watching the sunset ... and missed the
glorious moon on the rise !
Thanks, friend.

David BK~
My pleasure at being your first reply.  
I greatly appreciate your comments.
Scattered through the pages of
Open Forum #6, Open 5 and maybe even
Open #4 you will find poetic references
to the majestry of her mooness.
Thank you so much.
WELCOME TO PASSION'S !
~*Marge*~



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Beautiful beautiful presentation Marge...reminds me of the full moon I've been seeing here lately...is very fullfilling!!!

love ya,
Devina

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