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Where Are You Now?

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Marina
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0 posted 03-19-2000 07:28 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina

Where Are You Now?


A falling star called to me tonight
A compelling wish I had to make
To know you were safe and sound
And thinking only of me

Did you see the same shooting star
And wish a similar wish
Did you ask if I was thinking, only of you
And If I was happy and well

Is love in the stars
Or in fate or maybe destiny
Dreams perhaps is where it lives
Our hearts the perfect playground

I wait for you in daydreams
My heart calls to the next star
Always asking them a burning question


Where are you now?


Marina Mar 2000



[This message has been edited by Marina (edited 03-19-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-19-2000 07:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Marina! Very lovely!

Denise
Parker
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2 posted 03-19-2000 09:26 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

I see that your poetry is changing to romantic wanting. Ok now join the rest of the crew on passions boat.... Its very good.

Parker
Corinne
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3 posted 03-19-2000 10:51 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Lovely, Marina!

Corinne
Sven
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4 posted 03-19-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Marina...

It's really a little amazing to see this side of you. . . I guess I've always thought that it was there, and now that I see it here. . . I like it. . .

This was a very romantic poem. . . I enjoyed every word of it. . . reminds me of the song of the same name. . .

Beautiful Marina. . .but then again, I am never disappointed by you. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Meadowmuse
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5 posted 03-19-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

"I wait for you in daydreams"

...this is so lovely! all of it...

~ Claire
Marina
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6 posted 03-20-2000 12:05 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Denise, thank you


James,thank you but romance realy isn't my thing and this poem was orginally inspired through something else.

Corinne,thanks

Sven, your so sweet to me. Thank you for your compliments, and yes sometimes I can actaully be human.

Claire thank you very much

Marina

Marina
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7 posted 03-20-2000 09:18 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

no smart remarks from you Sven!!! I know there coming!

Marina
Sven
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8 posted 03-21-2000 12:50 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Marina,
       why do you expect them?  I know that you can be human. . . what else could you be?  

Well, the only thing that makes it hard for someone to believe that you're human could be these wires. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marina
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9 posted 03-21-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven, please do forgive me...of course YOU wouln't say anything smart!

Marina
Windrider Silverbreeze
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10 posted 03-21-2000 02:18 AM       View Profile for Windrider Silverbreeze   Email Windrider Silverbreeze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Windrider Silverbreeze



*chuckle*

Well as much as I would like to reply to the bantering back and forth I would merely like to say I thought your poem was lovely.  Keep up the wonderful work.  It is a pleasure to read your works.

Marina
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11 posted 03-21-2000 01:31 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Windreider,thank you very much for reading and your compliment.  Oh, and the other stuff you'll get use to around here!

Marina
hoot_owl_rn
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Marina...this is very nice  
Marina
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13 posted 03-22-2000 02:06 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Ruth, thank you very much
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