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Could This Be Love?

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Poet deVine
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0 posted 03-19-2000 06:35 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Poet deVine



I draw you closer to me
Your warmth and light enthralling
Our love affair so new
I hardly knew I was falling

I knew I turned you on
You lit up at my first touch
But I never knew Iíd need you
Quite so often or so much

You never really came alive
Until I was with you there
Then with my touch you glowed
And I knew youíd always care

I donít care how big you are
Only that with you I am alive
I donít love you for your gig
Nor even for your hard drive

Though Iíve never had a lover
Never even had a suitor
I plan to make you mine tonight
My sweet Micron Computer.

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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 03-19-2000 06:39 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

ROFLMAO!!...and Mr Laptop says he's sitting in the corner all lonely, hasn't been used for ages..*g*  Guess I prefer the larger model...ooops

HUSG
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2 posted 03-19-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

ROFL Sharon!  All this, and here it is your puter!  LOLOL
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3 posted 03-19-2000 06:44 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

deVine one, any computer would be proud to have you manipulate his browser!! It's either love or insanity, if there's a difference  

Rainbow, if you'll give me a chance, I promise my gig won't byte!  
Poet deVine
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4 posted 03-19-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Pretty sad isn't it? When I think of all the times all I had was 'software'..I could have been getting 'hardware'! Used to be computer-illiterate till I learned you need to have a certain 'keystroke' and that you can manipulate with a mouse!  
Nan
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That must be my problem - I never told my 'puter I loved it.. It died of a broken heart..
Loneheart
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6 posted 03-19-2000 06:59 PM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

And it is written thou shalt not abuse thy computer for we know not where love lives


 Loneheart
Denise
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ROFL   This is great Sharon!!

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8 posted 03-19-2000 08:14 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

"I knew I turned you on
You lit up at my first touch
But I never knew Iíd need you
Quite so often or so much"

and here I thought you were serious, threw me that's for sure....lol, funny one Sharon  

Mistikman
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lol, having a love affair are we Poet deVine?   I dont blame you, course my computer used to be oh so sexy, but has long since become old and ugly. Mine must be a prostitute though, it requires money for it to be sexy again!   Excellent work, as always.
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Poet deVine--this is fabulous!  (Now if we can just get the proper plug-and-play options...)  i think i just pulled a muscle laughing!  Thanks!
 
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