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Sailing Away

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tulip
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0 posted 03-19-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip

I'm out on the water
the wind blowing fast
the waves gently guiding
my life and my past.

My anchor is gone
I'm sailing away
I'm out in the ocean
living my day.

I look for some guidance
out here in the breeze
tossing and turning
I'm starting to freeze.

I'd like to head back
but the boat sails away
I'll keep heading forward
as I hope and I pray.

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1 posted 03-19-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Keep peddling! I like this one..there is hope...  
Denise
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2 posted 03-19-2000 04:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sometimes we feel adrift in the ocean, don't we? I wish you a safe voyage!

Denise
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Keep sailing, who knows what might be over the horizon for you  
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4 posted 03-19-2000 08:58 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Tulip,

I liked this a lot! In self-discovery, who knows what lies ahead. I wish you much luck in your future!

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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5 posted 03-19-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tulip~
I like the very idea of being
set adrift ... you did a nice job.

Many's the boat
set adrift on the sea
finding that we all
have buoyancy.

The winds will change
and when they do
the land will come blowing
back into view.
~*Marge*~


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***Tulip,
You are strong enough to go against the current.
You have loads of support here too,  keep going and you WILL make it.    


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

tulip
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7 posted 03-20-2000 09:35 PM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tulip

Thanks to all of you,
I am adrift, but I'm moving forward all of the time!!!
 
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