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My Wish
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My Wish |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Heart of my heart Love of my life Grant me this wish I wish tonight Heart of my heart Light of my life Take away my pain And ease my strife Heart of my heart Reason for my life Give me your love Let me be your wife Heart of my heart Bearer of life Only your love Can erase the knife Heart of my heart Song of my life Recommit to me Let's start a new life Heart of my heart Dream of my life My love to you I give My passion you could ignite. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Lone Wolf! So lovely! Denise |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely...I'm sure 'he' loves it!  |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
BEAUTIFUL!! Take Care Broken Wings  "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice rhyme format repeating the ife words throughout the entire poem |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Denise, Thank you. Came from the heart. Poet deVine, Thanks...but I'm not so sure. Everyone...I appreciate the kind words and encouragement. Thank you all. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent... I like the way that you say a lot in a limited form. . . I hope that you get your wish. . . ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, thank you for the compliment. I hope I get my wish too. I will hang on....I have to. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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