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Lone Wolf
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0 posted 03-19-2000 12:30 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lone Wolf

Heart of my heart
Love of my life
Grant me this wish
I wish tonight

Heart of my heart
Light of my life
Take away my pain
And ease my strife

Heart of my heart
Reason for my life
Give me your love
Let me be your wife

Heart of my heart
Bearer of life
Only your love
Can erase the knife

Heart of my heart
Song of my life
Recommit to me
Let's start a new life

Heart of my heart
Dream of my life
My love to you I give
My passion you could ignite.


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Denise
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1 posted 03-19-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Lone Wolf! So lovely!

Denise
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2 posted 03-19-2000 03:57 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely...I'm sure 'he' loves it!  
Broken Wings
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3 posted 03-19-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for Broken Wings   Email Broken Wings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Broken Wings

BEAUTIFUL!!

Take Care
Broken Wings  


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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 03-19-2000 08:25 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Nice rhyme format repeating the ife words throughout the entire poem  
Lone Wolf
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5 posted 03-19-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Denise,
Thank you.  Came from the heart.

Poet deVine,
Thanks...but I'm not so sure.

Everyone...I appreciate the kind words and encouragement.  Thank you all.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
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6 posted 03-19-2000 10:59 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent... I like the way that you say a lot in a limited form. . .

I hope that you get your wish. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 03-20-2000 11:41 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven, thank you for the compliment.  I hope I get my wish too.  I will hang on....I have to.

 Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end.
--Michael W. Smith
 
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