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Janitor In A Flush

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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 03-19-2000 10:25 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Janitor In A Flush

The silly round
bouncing
rubber ball
rebounded
wild and crazy
off the wall,
into the flushing
yuck toilet
it did bounce
only now
a nasty clog
to unhappily
announce.
Looks like
we'll need
a jolly
janitor in a flush
to get over
here
and help us
in a mighty rush.
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 03-19-2000 10:35 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I would hate to be a janitor. There's just too much paper work involved. I had many "toys in the toilet days". Cute poem
Liz
Nan
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2 posted 03-19-2000 12:22 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

EEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Where's the tydee bowl man when you need him?






[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-19-2000).]
Denise
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ROFL   Some days are like that, yeah the are!! This is hillarious!!

Denise
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Nice poem for a good laugh, but to be politically correct, there are no more jolly janitors, they all turned into enviromental technicians!
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 03-19-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Elizabeth: Thanks for responding, this was a fun poem just to write, no clog to clear here.

Nan: You and your graphics...LOL Thanks for reading and replying

Denise: Glad you enjoyed this and got a laugh too, Thanks for reading and responding

Septsong:Thanks for reading and replying, glad you enjoyed and at least now they have a more glorious name for a dirty job, I wouldn't want to go fishing in someone's toilet...LOL
 
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