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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-03-19 10:25 AM


Janitor In A Flush

The silly round
bouncing
rubber ball
rebounded
wild and crazy
off the wall,
into the flushing
yuck toilet
it did bounce
only now
a nasty clog
to unhappily
announce.
Looks like
we'll need
a jolly
janitor in a flush
to get over
here
and help us
in a mighty rush.

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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2000-03-19 10:35 AM


I would hate to be a janitor. There's just too much paper work involved. I had many "toys in the toilet days". Cute poem
Liz

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 2000-03-19 12:22 PM


EEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWW

Where's the tydee bowl man when you need him?






[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-19-2000).]
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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3 posted 2000-03-19 02:04 PM


ROFL   Some days are like that, yeah the are!! This is hillarious!!

Denise

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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4 posted 2000-03-19 02:12 PM


Nice poem for a good laugh, but to be politically correct, there are no more jolly janitors, they all turned into enviromental technicians!
Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 2000-03-19 10:37 PM


Elizabeth: Thanks for responding, this was a fun poem just to write, no clog to clear here.

Nan: You and your graphics...LOL Thanks for reading and replying

Denise: Glad you enjoyed this and got a laugh too, Thanks for reading and responding

Septsong:Thanks for reading and replying, glad you enjoyed and at least now they have a more glorious name for a dirty job, I wouldn't want to go fishing in someone's toilet...LOL

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