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Passing Shadows Of Dreams

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Marge Tindal
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Passing Shadows Of Dreams
~*Marge Tindal*~

Of dreamless sleep I do not know
the closing lids of evening stow
a myriad of images displayed with glee
within the very dreams of me

On flights of fancy
with billowing sail
I travel the sea
of dreams avail

For when I choose
to dream no more
I find myself moored
upon the shore

Ships on passing
in dream of night
remain adrift
on morning light

Come sail with me
to distant shore
of dream-filled nights
forevermore





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Very nicely done   I love the last stanza, what a way to finish an already great work  
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2 posted 03-19-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Marge,

You are such a loving person any one who sails with you will be quiet content.

Cerenity
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Marge,
I agree with both the above answers. *L*
Marge Tindal
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Hoot~
Thank you, honey.

Cerenity~
All who sail the dreams are welcome aboard my 'ship of dreams'.

Seymour~
Thank you, sailor of dreams.
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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You've wowed me again, Marge~
You weave such majic with your words... you are amazing~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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Beautiful, Marge! Never stop dreaming!

Denise
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Your boat is a poem
your sail is a bird
your dreams like crystal
sparkle with your words

Marge Tindal
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Mariee~
To weave the night with magic -
is to dream.  Thank you.

Denise~
To cease to dream ... would be to cease life.
Thank you, my friend.

Martie~

My boat is afloat
with winged sail
dreaming the crystalized words
billowing my sails

Thank you, my friend.




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Don't you know this one caught my eye...and touched my heart. Fascinating.

 ~shadows dance by the light within~

Marge Tindal
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>Passing Shadows~
Inspiration in 'passing' ...
so pleased that you enjoyed it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nan
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Put this one on my "Favorites from Marge" list...
Ravenlearns2fly
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Beauty!!2 sleep perchance 2 dream
Raven

 
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  i really enjoyed this one.Loved the title.
It resonates and captures the eye.
Zach

 
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Nan~
Very pleased.

Raven~
Ah ..... and that is what I did !  

Zachary~
Thank you for the compliment.
Welcome to our Passion's family.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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