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Pure Love Revealed

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Cerenity
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Whispers in my ear
Soft tones appear
Sounds enter
Chants of desires

Flooding waves
Take the senses
Mood altering
Flustering feelings

Act upon emotions
Pulse races
Droplets start
Faint of heart

Stronger defined tones
Donít want out
Or dare I
Take the chance

Consenting touch
Helplessly alive
Tears now stream
Reflections from both

Chanting forms clearly
I dare except
No fear abides
Desires match perfectly

Pure love revealed desires complete

By,   Cerenity





[This message has been edited by Cerenity-1 (edited 03-19-2000).]
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Nan
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Nice -  The building tempo of emotionalism runs rampant here, Cerenity - I like it..
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Oh, Cerenity~
Me too ... I like it.
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Hi its just me Cerenity,

I do not normally write like this so I feel like no one will understand what I was trying to say. This is about falling in to love and the fears and joys, and finally knowing it is true love on both sides.

Thank you,  Cerenity
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This is beautiful Cerenity!

Denise
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Cerenity-1,
Good thoughts, good poem, well done.
 
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