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Tears of Good bye I dance Now in the Rain
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Tears of Good bye I dance Now in the Rain |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Tears of Good Bye- I dance now in the rain Each tiny rain drop that falls from sky separated, are they each Each fall, for pain, for love now lost I cry out NOT FAIR!!, I question why? Just as the rain pours, I release, my tears of love that fall from thine eyes I watch as each one hits, splashing upon the ground dissipating are they, as the rain falls down from above Each droplet of rain , collects than into a pool mixing with those of my tears the tears I cry for that of another cascading down from me, the fool I stand now in the rain, arms outstretched to the sky Releasing my self from loves bitter pain I no longer denigh The thunder it CRASHES as my storm brews within LIGHTING then strikes piercing my heart As my anger gives way to my forgiveness of him Exhausted, I fall , then to the ground Letting go of the pain Watching my tears being carried away by the rain They flow to a puddle , my puddle of shame The storm ... at last .. departs from the sky I am now void, of all tears I know longer have the need The need to know why I rise up from my pain to begin my life once again Rain it must fall, just as tears must be shed I invite it, the chance , I now dance, not cry in the rain I will do so forever, for I now know the truth in my heart Together yet separate , for they each play a part To value my tears.....tears cried in the rain For both they are needed, required, to release my puddle of shame 4 all those whom have learned as I have 2 dance in the rain (c) Raven Legros |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Raven, I grieve for you. This is an experience I bet every human being shares with you. I liked the flow of the poem (no pun intended). I pitty the poor man who walked away from your poets heart. Recheck your work....there seem to be a few typos. INclan |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Inclan thank you for your sweet words if there r typoes which I am sure there r I am sorry. I have a problem with spelling even though my iq is 134 ,and what ever ells there is , blame it on the tequila. sorry I guess I'm having a rough time dealing with this um...really mean person who broke my heart. I will I promise get better thanks bye Raven |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Raven I know how you feel here *hugs* This was very sad and so very good. I have not learnt to dance in the rain yet but am planning on it.  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Raven~ You've danced the dance of broken hearts cast in puddles so deep. Time to kick off your shoes and do some puddle-jumping. May you dance with abandon in the delight of many refreshing rains. *HUGS* my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Awww hon, not only will you dance some day or even fly, but you will soar...mark my words. For now, a big hug here |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Hoot owl Marge and dark Angel thanks soooo much for your hugs and kind words. I love the rain I hope to dance again. Raven |
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