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Sven
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0 posted 2000-03-18 09:03 PM


Most noble Kaile
Embraces the Eastern sun
Sees the Western moon

Stranger in strange land
Discovering its secrets
Understanding them

Warrior of light
Gifted poet of the east
Share with us your song

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-03-18 10:21 PM


These are beautiful, Sven!

Denise

Marina
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2 posted 2000-03-18 10:33 PM


Well done Sven! A gifted poet of the south...at least south of me my friend!

Marina

INclan
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3 posted 2000-03-18 11:19 PM


Nicely done.  I think I like the first the best.

INclan

Nan
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4 posted 2000-03-19 09:04 AM


Warming skies of spring
Pervade morning's obscure haze
Summer's acquiesce

Nice ones, Sven..

Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2000-03-20 11:43 PM


Nice haiku Sven.  I like them all.

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--Michael W. Smith

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