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I Cry... |
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Macy New Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 6USA |
I cry tonight, for you hurt my soul ...you broke my heart. I cry this very night because you won't talk to me, you won't even look into my eyes. Why? Did I hurt you, or did you just realize looking at me reflected how much you wounded the very depths of my soul? Un-cry the tears I have wept, Take away this incredible pain of feeling hit by a train. I cry... Unable to move Barely able to breathe Look at me... Touch my tears... Feel my pain... Un-break my heart... Or just leave I cry and cry. My soul crumbles... My heart shatters... I can hardly believe my eyes as you look my way, turn around, and walk out the door. Ouch. That hurts more. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Macy~  Welcome to Passion's. Heart-rendering entrance. Hope to see more from you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Macy! Very sad yet beautfully done poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 03-18-2000).] |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
 Wow... what an entrance! That was very nice writing... though truly sad. Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Often times when one peron hurts another, they can't deal with it themselves- that's why they lose touch...hope things get better!! WELCOME!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Macy: I hope you'll find someone more deserving of your love... HUGS I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'... We are all works in progress, no? |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
So sorry 4 your pain. Someone more worthy of your love will come and take your tears away. Welcome Raven |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
First of all welcome to passions. Second of all your writing is very touching, and a wonderful way to release the pain inside of you, we often think that we are meant to carry the pain with us for all of time...atleast I did....I'm beginning to see that even I can smile from the inside out...hope you find the light within you soon. Thank you for sharing a little piece of you with all of us. Butterflies don't cry Are they more blessed than I? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
 You sure wrote your pain well! Hope you get to feeling better soon! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WELCOME  TO  PASSIONS!!!  Loved your poem, you express yourself so well!! Sometimes hurt touches us deeper than love! Sad but true! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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