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I Cry...

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Macy
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0 posted 03-18-2000 08:17 PM       View Profile for Macy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Macy

I cry tonight,
for you hurt my soul
...you broke my heart.

I cry this very night
because you won't talk to me,
you won't even look into my eyes.
Why?
Did I hurt you,
or did you just realize looking at me reflected how much you wounded the very depths of my soul?

Un-cry the tears
I have wept,
Take away this incredible pain
of feeling hit by a train.

I cry...
Unable to move
Barely able to breathe

Look at me...
Touch my tears...
Feel my pain...
Un-break my heart...
Or just leave

I cry and cry.
My soul crumbles...
My heart shatters...

I can hardly believe my eyes as
you look my way,
turn around,
and walk out the door.

Ouch.
That hurts more.

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 03-18-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Macy~
    
Welcome to Passion's.
Heart-rendering entrance.
Hope to see more from you.
~*Marge*~



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Denise
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2 posted 03-18-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Macy! Very sad yet beautfully done poem! Please check your email for a special welcome!

Denise

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mariee66
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3 posted 03-18-2000 09:02 PM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66




Wow... what an entrance!
That was very nice writing... though truly sad.
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

devina
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since 10-28-1999
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4 posted 03-18-2000 09:05 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Often times when one peron hurts another, they can't deal with it themselves- that's why they lose touch...hope things get better!! WELCOME!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 03-18-2000 09:10 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Macy: I hope you'll find someone more deserving of your love...

HUGS

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

Ravenlearns2fly
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6 posted 03-18-2000 11:09 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

So sorry 4 your pain. Someone more worthy of your love will come and take your tears away.
Welcome
Raven

 
Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 03-06-2000
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7 posted 03-18-2000 11:18 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

First of all welcome to passions.

Second of all your writing is very touching, and a wonderful way to release the pain inside of you, we often think that we are meant to carry the pain with us for all of time...atleast I did....I'm beginning to see that even I can smile from the inside out...hope you find the light within you soon.  Thank you for sharing a little piece of you with all of us.


 Butterflies don't cry
Are they more blessed than I?
WhtDove
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8 posted 03-18-2000 11:22 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

   You sure wrote your pain well! Hope you get to feeling better soon!
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 03-19-2000 05:54 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

WELCOME TO  PASSIONS!!!

Loved your poem, you express yourself so well!!

Sometimes hurt touches us deeper than love! Sad but true!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

 
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