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Laughing Matter |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Laughing Matter letting go I ask myself… of what? love? Friendship? neither one existed. I laugh, till my belly cramps I’ll laugh everyday through long winding roads, over steep hills of Green, buttercup scattered and under dark rocky bridges of my life. love lost? no never,‘twas love deceived denied of truth and forever between sunrise and sunrise will I be amused? indeed yes, till the day I expire. Dark Angel 2000 What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very, very well said, dreamer. Some things can best be considered just amusing, even though we smile with tear-filled eyes. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
But still it hurts. Great expression, Dark Angel. Very well done. Denise |
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jazzgal Junior Member
since 2000-03-07
Posts 37 |
even though we manage to laugh about things that hurts us, we still feel the pain and i could see it in this poem... beautifully done! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Sometimes laughing it off helps the pain pass a little faster...this was good!! Hope the pain lessens for you soon sweetie!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: You have style..  HUSG I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'... We are all works in progress, no? |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Get the white coats! She's finally snapped!  Just kidding Angel! Gotta laugh and gotta cry, you've written another great one my friend! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Balladeer, thank you for you kind reply ---------------------- Denise, yes it does Thanks hon ---------------------- Thanks jazzgal ---------------------- devina, thanks for your lovely reply, yes I hope it does too. ---------------------- Style? wow ummm not sure what to say about that, but thanks so very much Cindy. *hugs*----------------------- Angel, you always make me laugh girl, loved your reply heheh thanks Angel. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel~ I really like this. Feels like someone has shed the cloak of heartbreak and can now begin to frolic ... 'forever between sunrise and sunrise' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent! Keep writing through the pain and you'll soon be smiling again!  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Well spoken DA and a big ((((HUG)))) for you |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I liked the strength in this, and really laughter and tears are so similar in many ways...they release. Wonderful poem! |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
I really like this - it's a great expression of your feelings. Remember that I'm here for ya! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Laughter is to Tears as a Rainbow is to Rain. You captured the style and grace that only you can. Well done!! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
DA, enjoyed reading. I like Balladeer's comments as well. Good work. |
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