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My Muse Is NOT Amused

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Marge Tindal
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My Muse Is NOT Amused
~*Marge Tindal*~

Pouting muse
purse of lip
aggravated
hand on hip
tapping toe
impatience
growing
writers
block
soon
is
going
~*~
nowhere


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-18-2000 06:13 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Hehehe, this is cute!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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2 posted 03-18-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'll join that "not amused" club with you!  LOL
I've resorted to being a "reader only" now!  hehe  Threw my pen out the window and said to heck with it!  ROFL   You're funny when you're frustrated!
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Sending you a big chisel - to take some chips off that block.....
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This was most cool Marge~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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5 posted 03-18-2000 07:15 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Very funny Marge...somehow I don't think a block lasts too long for you.

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Did I mention I'm suffering too???
Yep... started on an essay hours ago... still doing free writing... sigh...
Marie~


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And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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Mine isn't amused either. What am I saying?! Mine isn't even here anymore!! Great read Marge!

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LoveBug~
Glad you liked.

Femme~
Hey !  I'm funny all the time !
(Hmmmm! Does that mean I'm 'frustrated all the time?)  Could be.
Thanks, gal.

Nan~
'If I had a chisel ...'

Mariee~
Thank you kindly, little one.
*On the essay ..
Now THAT is NOT amusing.
Better get it in gear.

INclan~
Actually, you're right.  My muse
gets upset because I don't type quickly
enough to vent her feelings.
If I had writer's block ... I'm just
sure that's how my little muse would look.

WildChild~
Oh, please ... I beg you
can I send mine over so I can
get some sleep?  
~*Marge*~



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How can your muse not be amused?
Could it be that it's been abused,
Exhausted by this great deluge
Of topics that you seem to choose?

Your muse gets sympathy from me,
Poor creature working endlessly
To keep pace with your verse and rhyme
I hope you're paying overtime!

I once worked part-time as a muse
And I will fill in, should you choose
To spur you on and tweak your wit...
Just offer me fringe benefits!!!!
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Well, Balladeer
the thing that's clear
is that my bossy little muse
tells me what thoughts to choose.

She prisses through the day
cavorts through the night
always telling me what to say
and then what to write.

She flaunts her little thoughts
right in front of me ..
then squeals with indignation
if one of them gets free.

She's a tyrant, I tell you.
Cracks a mean ole' whip.
Some day I'm gonna give her
a big, fat upper lip.

You've sided with her,
it's plain to see
that I get
NO SYMPATHY !

If you don't retract
the comments you made
I'll send her to Ft. Lauderdale
and at YOUR house she can stay !

When you try to sleep
and sleep won't come
you'll see that
my little muse is quite the agitator
I'll laugh my little heart out
cause to get some sleep
you'll have to EXTERMINATE her!


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge: I had to read that 2nd verse quite carefully you know...*g*

HUSG

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

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12 posted 03-18-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Well, Margie, there is one thing
I'll tell you, just for starters...
I've never had a problem with
Little amusing cavorters!

The reason she don't like you's not
That she's an agitator...
Her family lives in Gainesville and-
You guessed it! She's a Gator!!!!!!
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Hey, Marge, if she's getting on your nerves just send her north to me for a little while!!  

Cute poem!

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Writer's block, indeed...Thanks for the e mail help, will reply as soon as I can saddle up the ole slug of a computer...love to you...
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This was too cute Marge...can picture you with your hands on your hips...you're an inspiration all your own!!!

And you...have writers block...nah!!! Couldn't be MY Marge!!!


 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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Balladeer~
LOL ... you take the cake.
Them's fighting words
and you darn well know it !

To insinuate a muse of mine
could be such a traitor ...
is to throw a SEMINOLE spear
<~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>
at the nearest GATOR !

Still laughing !

Denise~
I'm sending her straight to
Balladeer's place !
I wouldn't wish her on a friend !  

Serenity~
LOL !  Thanks for being here.
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Devina~
Sorry I missed you in there, dearie.
I was busy throwing spears at Balladeer !
Thanks, gal.  She's just an ungrateful little muse who is working me to death.
I've always wondered what 'writer's block' was all about ... guess I'll never know !
Love ya' ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge--Please send your muse to California..I'd love her and I would take care of her and not berate her like you do...She could sleep with me each night and wake me with those love poems any time...please!

You are so wonderful...I just love what you do!
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Oh Martie~
Be careful what you wish for !

This is not my 'love' poem muse ...
this one is a little vixen that is fixing
to get her suitcase packed.
She flits about snapping her fingers for me to jump on every thought that passes.

Why, some of what she has spawned can't even be published here.  LOL ! I do have an image to maintain !

I have three other muses and she is creating havoc among them.  
I love your poetry too much
to send her your way ...
NOPE .. she's heading to Balladeer's.
~*Marge*~



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DARN!!!  Balladeer, please can I borrow Marge's muse????...when you're done, of course.

[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 03-19-2000).]
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DARN!!!  Balladeer, please can I borrow Marge's muse????...when you're done, of course.
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OOPS!
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LOL@Martie~
See what just 'thinking' about it did !
Girlfriend ... perhaps after just a night
he will send her to you with great glee.
~*Marge*~


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LOL...I think my muse just plain killed over somewhere. If you find an extra one around somewhere send it my way  
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