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Sunrise

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Joannak
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0 posted 03-18-2000 02:35 PM       View Profile for Joannak   Email Joannak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Joannak

A sudden shaft of light
pierces the sky, rising to the heavens.
Color of fire, heating the darkened morn.

I wonder, what lies at the end?

The crisp March air, clouds of blue-black
floating on a desolate pond of sky.
Now parted by the orange glow of the sun,
  slowly rising over the trees,
   sculpting the edges into soft cotton candy.

My heart burns for you.

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poetFemmeFatale
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1 posted 03-18-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Geesh, after reading this, I feel like saying, "Hi, my name is smoldering ashes, nice to meet you." LOL  This is beautiful, how you captured the fire of a new love...You're very lucky !  Welcome to Passions by the way!     Very nice poem!
INclan
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2 posted 03-18-2000 07:26 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Such Passion...Such Fire.  I enjoy sunrises, in the sky and in the heart. Wonderful imagery.

INclan
JamesMichael
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Nice writing...very descriptive.   James
serenity blaze
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4 posted 03-18-2000 10:04 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

This is lovely, another portrait in words...
Welcome to the forum, very glad you're here.
 
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