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The Breath of passion

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Loneheart
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0 posted 03-18-2000 03:02 AM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

The Breath of Passion

As visions of thee engulf my mind
I can almost feel thy silken softness caressing my soul.
Your soft enticing sighs still linger on within the lonely corridors
of my mind as I intreat the thoughts of thy gentle fingers
fragilely playing a melody of lustful tunes upon my soul.
Thy fragile beauty doth seduce me.
I hear a soft breeze whispering thy name
as it quickens my every breath and excites my soul.
Liken unto a mythical Goddess is thy beauty.
Oh Princess slender and chaste, sensuous are thee.
Pleasure mine eyes with thy beauty once more, that I might
bask in thy delectible passion that consumes this Knight's very soul.
The soft sweetness of thy voice stirs emotion within mine heart
that only ye shall quench.
My heart and my soul I give unto thee freely my love.
So harken unto this plea fair maid
draw not thy curtains so quickly
Lest loves light be darkened and wisp away
unto a land of faraway dreams,
where love is of naught?


Let he who has wisdom
hear these words...
If serenity and passion is thy life's quest
then patience shall be thy path.












[This message has been edited by Loneheart (edited 03-18-2000).]
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A Romantic Heart
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1 posted 03-18-2000 03:59 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

I am breathless...everytime I read your poetry my chest hurts...

The curtains are open inside this fair maids heart!
  
Ps...I hope you don't mind but I have your website as a link on my homepage.http://Sitebuilder.liveuniverse.com/dearrose


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare




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Pepper
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This is truly a gorgeous piece Loneheart .... I hope you find your "fair maid" soon .... what a lucky lady she will be .....
I enjoyed this piece so ....

Shannon


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Nan
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Very nice...

I particularly like your final stanza..
Patience certainly is the path to serenity..
Poet deVine
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4 posted 03-18-2000 12:18 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I enjoyed this..but sometimes I have no patience..I want it NOW!
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5 posted 03-18-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Breathtaking! This is so passionate and beautifully romantic!

Denise
Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 03-18-2000 03:32 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

My fingers are playing lustful tunes upon thy soul, as I patiently wait my knight to appear. WOW, you have got my heart, dear knight, with this lovely poem. What a wonderful romantic piece.
Bravo!
Liz
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