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The Last Train To Boston

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Marge Tindal
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The Last Train To Boston
~*Marge Tindal*~

I will love you forever
or
until the
sun forgets
to announce
her wake-up call
The moon loses her glow
Spring flowers fail to blossom
The tree drops her leafs and leaves
The river turns upstream flowing no more
The mountains have reached their peak
The last child laughing ... is the last
The bird in silence awaits his song
The butterfly stops fluttering
The last train to Boston is
the last train
anywhere
~o~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 03-18-2000 02:43 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

woo-woo heavy stuff there yuh i like it o course
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2 posted 03-18-2000 02:48 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

TEACH ME HOW TO DO THIS!!!  I am so graphically/presentationally--szat a woid?--
challenged...Aawwwgghh......and oh, yeah? the content?  the mirror of your soul! (which is bee-yoo-tee-full!)
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3 posted 03-18-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

wanna'd to ask a quickie is that icq number yuh got there correct???
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W.O.W.~
Thanks, guy.
And yes the ICQ # is correct.
For some reason your request for
authorization didn't take.
But I have added quite a few of the
Passion's friends through it.
Try again.  I'm not on it often as it
has a tendency to distract me from my
writing.  But ... I'll catch up with
you one of these times.

Serenity~
I will e-mail you with some assistance.
LOL at you.
When I write I 'feel' the words
so deeply ... they seem to flow.
Thanks for liking what I do.
~*Marge*~



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hey serenity if you wanna know how marge does those great fonts and graphics with her presentations just click edit on her poem and you can see the html code but you won't be able to jack with the poem not like you would
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Walter .....
Go to your room !
I'm going to enjoy EXPLAINING to her
through e-mail.
LOL !
~*Teach*~



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Cool poem Marge, I like the presentation  
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Mystic~
Thank you sweetheart.
I like your style !
~*Marge*~


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Great poem! And, as always, I love your creativity with the images. Wonderful work!!!!

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Wonderful Marge , simply Wonderful .....
Your mushy hearted friend,
Shannon
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Now that sure sounds like love to me! Beautiful as always, Marge!  

Denise
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Your mind is a fountain of poetic expression!
Do you also sing in the shower????

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.
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Nice one, Marge -

Last train to Boston, eh??...
I tried that.. and here I sit - right outside Boston - waiting for someone else to do the same..
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Wonderful images here Marge...do you think  trains will ever be obsolete?  What about the midnight train to Georgia?  Hope not...you are so romatic...great form for this lovely love.  
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Marge, You are such a clever little thing. Always a new twist, always a different way of holding onto love. You are the genius of passionate's pour, the master artist of poetic love images, with a brand new outlook every day. No wonder everyone is in love with your poetry.
Such a clever little Irish Cherokee.
Love ya, dear
Liz
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ChristiesHeart~
Thank you little sister of soul.

Pepper~
We 'mush' together, my friend.

Denise~
It is the love season.  Spring forth !

Danny~
Indeed I do !  And in the car, the kitchen, the grocery store and even under the sprinkler in the yard !
LOL ! Thanks, fella !

Nan~
Oh, check your tickets.
I think you were scheduled for
Memphis Station.

Martie~
Oh my ... I hope not.  The train is a part of our history that I hope always chugs along.  I can't imagine our life without those romantic whistle-stops.

Elizabeth, my friend~
Thanking you for that more than you could know.  Love has to be the greatest elixer of which we partake.
And this Irish Cherokee is 'high' on the effects of love's elixer.
~*Marge*~




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Well done Marge.  I liked the presentation in the form of a marquis diamond.  It reminded me of the old Beetles hit....

INclan
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INclan~
You are most perceptive.
BEATles playing in the background as this one came to mind.
Funny how the Karma runs !
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-20-2000).]
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You are so talented my friend. Love this!!  
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Hoot~
Coming from you, my friend, I am humbled.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


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No offense or anything but tiz BEATles yuh know cuz they got the beat yuh hehehehehe i love that lil joke o theirs but yuh yuh yuh love the beatles so had to say summin
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Walter~
Yah .. notised it earlear bute tha durned
edit buton throwz me out ever tyme, jist lik hit did thes tyme ...
see ....
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But I am glad you noticed.
~*Marge*~



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Heart stopping as usual Marge...tell me, how is it that I never hear a sad one from you huh?? You are my smile make I'd say!!!

XXOO
~D

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Devina~
Well ... 'never' is a long time coming.
Some days it rains the tears
but most days are filled with sunshine.
Thank you, hon.
I'm not the only 'smile-maker'
your life ....    
~*Marge*~


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