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Kevin
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0 posted 03-18-2000 01:24 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

How do you say I love you?
Could there ever be a word
that would prove this passion to
my love, that you have never heard?

Could I ever say I love you?
When I fear you wont accept
Would it help some if you knew
about, how over us I wept?

Could you tell me that you loved me?
Could I ever see it through?
Will together ever be
a name we have for me and you?

How could I say I love you
When we know you’ll break my heart?
And there’s nothing I can do
to stop it from its fall apart.

Will there ever be a word
upon your beauty I could grace?
Or has my fate concurred
with this ever lonely place…

© Copyright 2000 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 03-18-2000 01:29 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

So much longing in this Kevin! Beautifully done! I hope your dreams come true!

Denise
Kevin
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2 posted 03-19-2000 01:01 AM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

thanks d, dont we all hope our dreams come true
Marina
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3 posted 03-19-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Kevin this is wonderful!! I can really relate to this poem, as I'm sure so many people can. Nothing is more difficult then putting yourself out on a limb.

Marina
Parker
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... the old black rum


4 posted 03-29-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Kevin, I truly like reading your style. A great poem.

Parker
CherylLynnMckee
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5 posted 03-29-2000 01:32 AM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Beautifully written..haven't we all been here and felt this way at some point in are lives.

 
hsystems
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6 posted 03-29-2000 01:53 AM       View Profile for hsystems   Email hsystems   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hsystems's Home Page   View IP for hsystems

Kevin, this is fantastic!  It really touched me.  Keep up the good work!


 Beautiful, Thought-Provoking Poetry
http://www.h-systems.net/p1.htm
Janet Marie
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7 posted 03-29-2000 02:01 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

How do you say I love you?
Could there ever be a word
that would prove this passion to
my love, that you have never heard?
Could I ever say I love you?
When I fear you wont accept
Would it help some if you knew
about, how over us I wept?
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this is a deeply emotional piece...very impressive Kevin...
very well expressed and written...
you have a great stlye and talent.
very nice.

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

hoot_owl_rn
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8 posted 03-29-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Kevin...nice to see you around   Nice poem  
Corinne
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state of confusion


9 posted 03-29-2000 03:26 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Kevin,

great poem, universally beautiful.

Cor
 
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