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serenity blaze
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0 posted 03-18-2000 01:17 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

What have i wished upon myself?
What things my pen has set in motion?
Who told my heart to beat again?
My fingers, masturbate emotion?

Who set the rhythm of this drum?
Who timed the Revelation?
Who made me feel what I would not--
to spite sensational sensation?

Who was it whispered me 'aware'?
Whose eyes on neck, did I feel stare?
What have I yearned for all along?
Who is the Silence Of My Song?

like books that yearn to be on shelves,
we all wish to complete ourselves...
© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
John Yaws
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1 posted 03-18-2000 01:20 AM       View Profile for John Yaws   Email John Yaws   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit John Yaws's Home Page   View IP for John Yaws

Aye, lassie. Complete ourselves indeed. An' Faith! I'd say ye've done it well wi' this one.
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2 posted 03-18-2000 01:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Serenity~
This is simply wonderful.

'Who was it whispered me 'aware'?'

Someone must have ..
and now you seem wide awake!
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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3 posted 03-18-2000 01:27 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful Serenity! Great writing!

Denise
devina
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4 posted 03-18-2000 01:55 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Tell it like it is sis...this was great...you've got some damn good lines in this one!!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

serenity blaze
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5 posted 03-18-2000 03:20 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

THANX TO:

"Gunslinger", with utmost respect, sir...
              thank you, again...enjoyed the
              the "blarney"! thanx again.

"Marge/Mom",  (Mom's #1!)  serenity smiles...

Denise------  i don't know how to begin to
               thank you...


devina!  extra-special thanks, my internet
         'sis', am sending extra-special
         blessings your way! (Smile, Miss
         Lovely!)
Janet Marie
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6 posted 03-18-2000 10:07 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

wow this poem is WAY COOL!!!!!
i loved the way it read and yes, you have some AWESOME lines in this...
perfect title...
jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne


Martie
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7 posted 03-18-2000 01:53 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Serenity--very strong and excellent poem...and I echo the wonderful lines!!  Bravo!
Joannak
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8 posted 03-18-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Joannak   Email Joannak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joannak

Serenity,
What a wonderful piece of work, it made me think about that person in my own life that makes me complete...

joanna
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9 posted 03-18-2000 05:55 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Wow...the last 2 lines did it for me!  Talk about wrapping it up with a powerful bow!     I can say I have felt like an unfinished book myself of late!  LOL  This really put it all into perspective for me!!  Wonderful read, with some colorful words!     HOT
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10 posted 03-18-2000 07:32 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Serenity, I stand in awe.

INclan
serenity blaze
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11 posted 03-18-2000 08:54 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

JM --ya got me thinkin' with your "passions
    heat"  Thanks, luvie!

Martie--high praise from the master...
        serenity bows humbly...

Joanna--thank you.  I missed your entrance
        into the forum.  I'll be looking for
        your work in the future.

pFF--you had a hand in this also...really enjoyed your last post!  glad to see you stuck around.   Thanks!

Inclan--I am in awe of your awe, and also your apparent ability to type while standing!
Thanks to all!
 
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