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Diamond Necklace

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Poeminister
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0 posted 03-18-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

Diamond Necklace


The Diamond necklace
that I gave to you my friend
is of a special cut, design, and make
it will decrystalize to black carbon
if not kept in your keepsake
Its glitter and sparkle will dim
and it will turn so grey and dull
if not kept in your possession
It's the tangible way of my sending
to you in Wodonga, my love and affection

You said to me that perhaps
you'll send it back and not accept it
because I'm in a different hemisphere
but I shan't accept it back I say
because it's meant only for you to wear
it must of costed much, you say,
I say yes it was an arm and a leg
and for you my other ones too anyday

I do not know if I will ever
see it hanging at your sweet neck
I know that many would think me foolish
for loving someone so far away
for we have not even yet met in flesh
though we both desire to someday
feelings in words, my heart in a mesh,
is just trying get out and through
and free itself so it may say
that I will always care for you


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Denise
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1 posted 03-18-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sure sounds like love to me! I hope you two get the chance to be together! Who knows? Perhaps one hemisphere will become home for the both of you!
Nan
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Sincerity such as this certainly deserves to be met with an open heart... I surely wish the best...(fingers and toes crossed here)..
RainbowGirl
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3 posted 03-19-2000 06:06 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

I hope you'll let us know the outcome...wishing you good luck..

HUGS

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

 
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