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Hold Me Like Tomorrow Matters

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Marge Tindal
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Hold Me Like Tomorrow Matters
~*Marge Tindal*~

When shadows of the night awaken
you come waltzing through the door
Hold me like tomorrow matters
dance with me forevermore

Through the years I will remember
love that always held me tight
Hold me like tomorrow matters
do not leave me in the night

Forever holding and enfolding
thoughts of you within my heart
Hold me like tomorrow matters
from this love I will not depart

I always will remember
evenings locked in your embrace
Hold me like tomorrow matters
your love reflected on my face





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-18-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful Marge! You seem to be able to master any form of poetry! Such a talent you have!

Denise
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2 posted 03-18-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for mariee66   Email mariee66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mariee66

Ohh... How I love your poetry Marge! ~
This was simply beautiful~
Marie~


 "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind;
And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard

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3 posted 03-18-2000 12:42 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

I have to agree with Denise here Marge.  Such wonderful form and beautifully expressed.

Marina
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4 posted 03-18-2000 01:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise~
I value your opinion on what I write.
I don't know about 'master' ...
but I sure do enjoy writing.

Mariee~
Thank you sooooooo much.
I'm pleased that it gives you such joy.

Marina~
Gosh, I appreciate it so much.
My heart just says write it ... so I do.
~*Marge*~





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 03-18-2000 01:55 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh marge this is soooo beautiful, beautifully written!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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6 posted 03-18-2000 01:57 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I'm glad you listened to heart on this one Marge...the title ays so much!!! Keep that pen flowing m'dear...this was too good!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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7 posted 03-18-2000 02:03 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
This one just jumped from the
trees on my morning break at work.
It hung around until I got home
to pen it.  So glad you enjoyed.

Devina~
Honey, you are such an 'upper'.
Thank you always for being such
a positive reader.
I'll do my best to keep those
muses happy.  But .... goodness
they sure keep me busy !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Oh my!  This is so deep and lovely Marge!
(I swear, mom. i didn't see a thing...)

But truly, you have moved me.  Lovely, lovely, love...
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9 posted 03-18-2000 02:32 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Little Serenity~
I so appreciate your replies.
I can just hear the enthusiasm.
You're a sweetie and I thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 03-18-2000 03:22 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Marge
Only this from one so devine
Just dreamy
Tracie


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Tracie~
How sweet your replies.
Thank you from the heart of
my little bottom.  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com           



[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-18-2000).]
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This is beautiful.  You are in an elite class all your own Marge.  This was so.....in the moment.  I loved it!!
**butterfly kisses and angel wing hugs**
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13 posted 03-18-2000 08:30 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

"I always will remember evenings locked in your embrace."  Now these are the kind of memories I desire to remember.  Lovely writing and lovely memories.   James
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14 posted 03-18-2000 02:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ButterfliesDC~
Oh .. what a very nice thing for you to say.
Mega thanks.

James~
With your romantic heart and kindness ...
I'm sure you will have these moments to remember, love.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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15 posted 03-18-2000 03:38 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

Marge
as always your words leave me with such a warm feeling. My tomorrow matters now more than ever, thank you for being the spirit that guides my heart.
Raven

 
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Raven~
When spirits touch, their sole purpose
is to guide another soul where they need be.
Ours met so that each could guide the other.
You lend me yours ... I lend you mine
together we walk in harmony.
Thank you for your warm comments.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sweetest Marge,
You did it again ... I'm sitting here in a puddle of melt ...  
This sings to me ....
Beautiful ... so beautiful ....
L,
Shannon
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Lovely, Marge!

Corinne
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Marge: So much I could say...Big HUSG
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20 posted 03-19-2000 11:36 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
Hold me like tommorow matters,
Swept me off my feet
And then came the repeat.
Wonderful poem. *L* Sy
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21 posted 03-19-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Marge the title just rang! The poem was wonderful too!  I think you have inspired me to write something on this   thanks
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It does matter, very sweetly written.
Marge Tindal
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Pepper~
Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed.

Corinne~
Thanks, gal.

RainbowGirl~
Just knowing you liked is enough.

Seymour~
Pleasing you - pleases me.

WhiteDove~
Anxiously awaiting.
The title sang out to me too.

Gemini~
Thank you.  Yes, it does, indeed.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Do poems like this jump out on just anyone who wanders under those trees? *G* Could you point me towards that forest??? Please!!! This is beautiful, Marge.
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