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Just A Whisper Away

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Ravenlearns2fly
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0 posted 03-17-2000 11:23 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly



A whisper Away

                         To You My Love

                         To you my love I come by flight
                         I fly in shadows through-out the night
                         Fear not my love of the dark around
                         For I am near , my love surrounds

                         I am within the whispers as you venture out
                         With in the wind so gently I fly about

                         I am within the trees, they will keep you safe
                         My arms the branches, whom to you embrace

                         I am within the rain as it falls from sky above
                         Each drop a heat beat of my eternal love

                         I am within the moonlight that off in distance lies
                         Forever watching as you close your eyes

                         I am within the sun that warms you with my light
                         To greet in morning, at dusk to kiss goodnight

                         I am within your dreams, in case you fear
                         To destroy the monsters if they draw near

                         To you my love, I come by flight
                         All around you I am, yet hidden from sight
                         I am forever close, you need think of me only
                         I am bound by your heart, so you need never be
                         lonely

                         By (c) Raven Legros




 
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Severn
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1 posted 03-17-2000 11:29 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Oh what a breath of lovely!
   Well done Raven, well done.

I am within the rain as it falls from sky above
                         Each drop a heat beat of my eternal love

                        
Love that line!



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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2 posted 03-17-2000 11:36 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

Severn
Well now! thank you very much. I wrote this 2 years ago when I fell in love (I was such a fool) but 1 thing good came out of it ok maybe there were a few good things. ha ha but this man said to me that words ment nothing so I tried to find away to express my self using words yet providing symbols he could identify with. it worked and I became a better poet in the process. now if I could just get this love thing to work ha ha!!!! smile
Raven

 
Denise
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3 posted 03-18-2000 12:02 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You have a beautiful way with words, Raven!
This is very lovely!

Denise
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4 posted 03-18-2000 12:16 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Raven, my friend~
This is simply lovely.
Guess something good came out
of the relationship ...
and this is proof of that.
Keep smiling !  
~*Marge*~


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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 03-18-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Raven - these words are beautiful - they were music to my ears - thank you for sharing them with us .......   Roniece  
Marina
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6 posted 03-18-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

A wonderfully well expressed poem.  Welcome to Passions!

Marina
Ravenlearns2fly
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To denise, Marge, Roniece, and Marina- thank you all for your kind words.Warms my heart that you all liked this poem.
Raven

 
Janet Marie
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8 posted 03-18-2000 04:28 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Raven,
this truly a beautiful poem...its lovely and graceful to read...very well written with your sentiments and emotions.
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne


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9 posted 03-21-2000 03:09 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

JM
thank you for your very nice words, i am so glad you and the others liked this poem
raven

 
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