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Our Minds Entwined

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 03-17-2000 06:04 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Far from the physical
Space where our shells perform
Puppets on mental strings
These most glorious things
Find a way to keep the bodies warm

Ever the constant illusion
Of reality out of reach
Cold comfort though
Cold winds blow
Our minds yet, never breached

Suffer these, the hallowed
Times in which we dwell
Far beyond physical
More than mystical
Than these earthen, dusty shells

No magic words be spoken
Nor given an outward sign
We become
As one
When our minds become entwined


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 03-17-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

mmmm very nice..you can even make mind reading romantic...

Far from the physical
Space where our shells perform
Puppets on mental strings
These most glorious things
Find a way to keep the bodies warm
Ever the constant illusion
Of reality out of reach
Cold comfort though
Cold winds blow
Our minds yet, never breached

very nice  loved this one

stalking you still
your jm
PoeticKnight
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2 posted 03-18-2000 12:05 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Thanks janet, hey look, my computer at home works...*L*
Janet Marie
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3 posted 03-18-2000 12:20 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

hey are you still on???? email me
Janet Marie
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4 posted 03-18-2000 12:39 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

well i guess your gone...
*sigh*...the weekends are so long...
(and its still Friday)  LOL
guess i'll have to stop back by this one off and on and entwine my mind with you.
stalking you always...jm
Janet Marie
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5 posted 03-18-2000 07:38 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

These most glorious things
Find a way to keep the bodies warm**

Ever the constant illusion
Of reality out of reach
Cold comfort though
Cold winds blow
Our minds yet, never breached**

they say small minds think alike...
wanna guess what im thinking about tonite  
stalking you always,
your jm



 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne


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6 posted 11-08-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

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