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Corinne
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0 posted 03-17-2000 05:56 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Corinne


If only I could be with you now,
for this love, so clear, so strong,
Id spend every passing moment,
in the place where I belong.

Within your arms of shelter,
just listening to your song,
the one that always calls to me
even when I feel so alone.

You never let me turn away,
as if I would ever want to,
in that quiet and gentle voice,
repeating the words I love you.

I love you, too.

Corinne

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Poeminister
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1 posted 03-17-2000 05:58 PM       View Profile for Poeminister   Email Poeminister   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poeminister's Home Page   View IP for Poeminister

This is beautiful!
Marina
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2 posted 03-17-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Your last few poems are beckoning to romance...so anything we should know about? Come on do tell....

Marina
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3 posted 03-17-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Corinne!

Denise
Nan
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4 posted 03-18-2000 09:18 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

I like it..... Let's go another round..
Corinne
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5 posted 03-18-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you, Poeminister, Marina, Denise and Nan!

Corinne
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 03-18-2000 07:27 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Corinne~
I like !
Sung so softly.
You hum a sweet tune.
Sounds like a duet is strumming.
~*Marge*~


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Marina
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7 posted 03-18-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Corinne does this mean your not giving out names...places..or details?

Marina
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8 posted 03-18-2000 08:29 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm melting in your imagery, Corinne.
Parker
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9 posted 03-18-2000 08:33 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Within your arms of shelter,
just listening to your song,
the one that always calls to me
even when I feel so alone

.... repeating the words I love you.

True love can come in strange ways,
from somewhere the heart does not expect,
and a true love, loves to whisper them to our heart.
You are quite the poet Corinne, and this poem whispers to my lonely heart, sweet Corinne.

Parker

jazzgal
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10 posted 03-18-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for jazzgal   Email jazzgal   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for jazzgal

this is such a sweet poem, yet i feel a sense of lonliness in it... bittersweet feelings, wonderfully done!
Corinne
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11 posted 03-19-2000 12:17 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

Thank you, Marge (strum, strum, strum)

Marina, I'll never tell!  (grin)

Balladeer, keep on meltin, honey!

Parker,a special thank you.

Jazzgal, thankyou, yes a bit of sadness is there.

Corinne

 
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