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~The King Of Her Heart~
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~The King Of Her Heart~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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You are my king, < !signature-->Thy words of passion fill my heart, Words so deeply expressed, Heartfelt words melt away my emptiness, You are my king, My hero, my heart, my soul I sing, Sing I do, Just for your sweet ears to hear, You are my king, I will respect and honor, Give you everything I have to offer, Give you my heart, my soul, my life, I shall be thy wife, You are my king, Such sweetness and love I see inside thy heart, Heart that is clear, Heart that is true to my heart, whenever near, or far apart, You are my king, You rule with such compassion and selflessness, Heart of gold, Is thy beauty do none compare, Heart that gives to those in darkest despair, You are my king, My world, The other half to my soul, Soul that is free to love you, Without restrictions of thy control, When I see the world, As I look upon everything, I see only you, The ruler of my heart, My one true king. "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 03-17-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautiful, RH! What a guy! Denise |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a lucky guy, RH!!! I love the use of the word king. Truly you have found your soulmate. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Hey its ok to dream...after all poetry is dreams and fantasies...imagination put on paper, daydreams and wishes written on paper.  "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Someday I will find a "king" such as your poem mentions~ Every woman should be so lucky~ Your poem was very nicely done-- very romantic indeed~ Marie~ "Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind; And therefore is wing'd Cupid painted blind." The Bard |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Romantic Heart~ Dream your dreams. You've written him so well ... should you ever meet him you will recognize him by the 'King' on paper. Heck, you've drawn him so life-like I think I'd recognize him. If I spot him ... I'll tell him you're looking for him ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
This was romantically lovely...just remember that dreams are only made to come true!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks Marie I hope you find him! Marge lookout for him, he might be here on passions? Send him my way! Devina: Your right, let us keep on dreaming!maybe with both of us dreaming it will help them along! hehe! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful dream , Beautiful man , Beautiful poem Romantic Heart .... This poem lives up to your signature name ....... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks pepper! and thanks for all the e-mails! I appreciated them! they helped me!!! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
This is really beautiful ! I like the style you write in! You're such a romantic, girl! I can always count on you to make me *feel* a bit of that, that I'm not so good at feeling anymore! LOL Not that I FEEL that for you! hehe That kind of came out wrong! I mean that I can read your words, and how you *sing* to you king, and it makes me sigh....I used to sing too. Vocal cords snapped! Anyway, thanks. BTW, liked your reply on my storybook poem. LOL I agree that dreams and fantasies are good...unfortunately, I get sucked in too deep, and just can't put the darn book down sometimes! Kind of takes away from my LIFE, ya know? LOL |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thanks poet fem, things will get better with time, like wine!hehee! check out my poem once upon a dream...I wrote it with you in mind...for hope in the future! "Love is not love Which alters when it alteration finds, Or bends with the remover to remove. O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare |
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