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Everything is Somewhere

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Nan
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Everything is somewhere;
There is no empty space.
Everywhere there's something,
And each thing's got a place.

Nothing's ever nowhere,
Or found without a spot.
There's no place with nothing;
An empty space there's not.

Things will always be there.
Though it may seem quite clear,
Air's made up of something.
What is the matter here?

Some things are found elsewhere,
Or sometimes side by side.
Many things keep moving;
Let's hope they don't collide!!







[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-18-2000).]
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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 03-17-2000 04:45 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

yuh like earth and mars see i saw this movie once and... nice poem thur nan!
Danny Holloway
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yes, but I still cannot find my keys!
I like your creative mind in this poem.
Nice work.
Poeminister
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"Air's made up of something.
What is the matter here?"

Nan, This is wonderful poem.  It's even scientific, in a poetic way... Sometimes I believe theres a certain nothingness that is the capacity wherin all eveythingness exists, but then I think..take out everythingness, nothingness must still be somethingness of some sort so perhaps there is no such thing as absolute nothingness..that all things are matter.  Don't know if I make sense..anyway...
Happy St. Patricks day.  I liked that little leperchaun graphic.

from Poeminister
  




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Corinne
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Nan, you are very creative and inventive, my dear!

Cor
Nan
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wayout - Are you still watchin' those movies?? You know what I told you about that - They warp your brain!!...    

Danny - Thanks... um.. Your keys are somewhere - Just like everything else..    

Poeminister - If you're gonna play this game, you have to get your Ness's right.. It's like this..  
  
quote:
"a certain NothingNess that is the capacity wherin all EverythingNess exists, but then I think..take out EverythingNess, NothingNess must still be SomethingNess of some sort so perhaps there is no such thing as absolute NothingNess...."

This all makes PERFECT SENSE to me..
........ Sincerely, Nancy Ness.....    


Corinne - Takes one to know one...    

Thanks everyone..    





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Martie
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6 posted 03-17-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I have nothing to say...er..or was that everything...I am so confused.

Enjoyed your poem Nan
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FunnyNESS, Nan!  

~ claire

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This is cute, Nan!  

Denise
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Nan: Thank heavens my brain knows it resides inside my head cause otherwise I'd never remember where it was...LOL...Now all I have to do is remember where I put my head..*g*

HUSG

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

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10 posted 03-17-2000 09:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

NaniNESS~
What a cute, cute poem.

A great sense of humor
seen coming out of you.
When nothing is the order ...
NothingNESS will do.

~*Marge*~


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Ah ha, Nan this was good, twisted my brain a bit, but was good.  haha
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To post with the most
We all count on Nan
No leprechauns could
In a thousand life-spans
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Nan,  what a Ness you are!! I never underNESStimate you!
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Nan
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This was really fun to write...  

Martie - YOU think YOU're confused???

Claire - A bit of SilliNess in each day, I say..

Denise - Just keep on writing those good Sea-faring tales...

RG - Brain farts, you say??

Marge - I kept trying to find a line where I could put "AnythingNess", and the meter just didn't work...

WhtDove - Like a pretzel here..

Moose - What leprechaun?

Deer - Not Nessessary....

Severn - I understand completely

          

Merci, all....
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 03-18-2000 05:16 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Nan,
And when they do collide,
It becomes the new untried.
Love the way you write. Sy
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Oh NannerNess, what a mess
My nothingNess did compress
A somethingNess...but I digress

What silliNess conjured this?
A somethingNess from nothingNess?
Oh NannerNess, pray confess

Was it meaNess that did compress
The somethingNess to nothingNess?
Or was it too hard to digest?

My orbs are blessed, like the rest
From the rhymes of a Miss Ness
Written with such PurrrrrrfectNess




 The cat grins.
Slowly the grin vanishes
Until only the cat remains.
DOH!

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LOL...yes, it's usually in the last place I look too  
Michael
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Everything is spinning!!!

I think it's just way too early or way too late for me to try to make heads or tales of this right now.  Good poem, teach...


Michael
 
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