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Once Again

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Denise
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0 posted 03-17-2000 03:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

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Once again
Another part of me dies
Thrust clean through
By reality’s sword
I bleed

Again

drop

by

drop

by

drop
~
drip
~
drip
~
drip

© Copyright 2000 Denise - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
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1 posted 03-17-2000 04:46 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Piercing piece you have written here.  I have gone for bandages, hold pressure on that wound.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 03-17-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Denise, dear
Your creative juices are flowing. I know the feel of that blade. And you wrote it so well.
Good work
Liz
Corinne
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3 posted 03-17-2000 05:21 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

And Corinne puts the drip drip action into fast reverse, replenishing Denise's blood supply!

I like how you push the envelope, Denise!

Corinne
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4 posted 03-17-2000 05:43 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Ouch, I felt that from here...and now I drip too...
Ravenlearns2fly
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5 posted 03-17-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

oooooo!! I really liked this poem,words at times can bring such vision to thine eyes.
Raven

 
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6 posted 03-17-2000 07:37 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Dee I really like this and the way it fell like drops at the endof the poem!  

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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Denise~

This is very creative.
I like the message and the format.
I like the way it 'flows'  
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 03-17-2000 08:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WOW! Denise, this is fantastic, loved the way it flowed and the format too. Terrific writing.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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9 posted 03-17-2000 09:08 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Denise: HUSG

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

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I offer you a chalice, and let not a drop be stricken...This is GOOD "d"!  Thanks!
Denise
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Thank you, Danny, Elizabeth, Corinne, Martie, Raven, Romantic Heart, Marge, Dark Angel, Rainbow (HUGS), and Serenity for reading and for your kind comments. You all are so wonderful!

Denise
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12 posted 03-18-2000 02:22 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Denise, This is awesome writing I love the form you used and the whole way you wrote this.
WhtDove
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You sure have a way of portraying your pain and hurt! Denise, keep praying, they know not what they do. You bring tears to my to know you're hurting so bad.  I love ya Denise!  ~hugs~
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Denise,
I too, like the format you used here ....  a poem that the reader really feels ....
Excellent !!
If you are hurting, I send you hugs... and if you're not, I send you hugs ...
Denise
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15 posted 03-18-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Gloria, Rebecca and Pepper for reading and commenting and for the hugs! They are appreciated!

Denise
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Denise...me thinks free verse is becoming of you  
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Denise...me thinks free verse is becoming of you  
Denise
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18 posted 03-20-2000 01:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you Ruth! I'm glad you think so!

Denise
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19 posted 03-20-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

d,
To staunch that wound  , some humor quick
Bandages will need  , that little *****
Denise
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20 posted 03-20-2000 08:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

ROFL   Oh, that's great, Dr. Moose! Thanks, I needed that!

Denise
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very very creative!!  
 
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