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A vision of love

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LoveBug
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0 posted 03-17-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for LoveBug

God grants me a vision every night
A vision of love
Iím thankful for this glimpse into Heaven
That I get each night
Little undeserving me

I get to see myself, dancing under the stars
With the one my heart beats for
He holds me close, and I can feel each beat
Of his golden heart
As the stars shine above

But, as grateful as I am
The vision is merely that
Not reality... just a vision
Is it a vision of what is to be,
Or what can never be?
Only time will tell

But for now, I enjoy the visions
While they last
And for the rest of the night
I stand under the stars
And wonder how it would feel
To be loved




 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 03-17-2000 12:38 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

My vision is a fifteen year old poet with a talent beyond her years, standing under the stars, and writing beautiful verses. Well done, dear poet
Liz
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2 posted 03-17-2000 12:40 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, this is beautiful.  A feeling most everyone of us can relate too. Did she say you were 15?  Wow!


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Thanks for the complements, Liz and Micheal. You are going to give me a huge ego!

Yes,I am a mere 15 year old. I'm a freshman, and I just got my learners permit. PLEASE don't hold it against me!  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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4 posted 03-17-2000 06:02 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Well done, Love Bug! Your vision was beautiful and excellent!

 Nathan
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