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~It's not love~

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tracie66
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0 posted 03-17-2000 06:21 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

It hurts you because you think it's love
But I know you know you've had enough

Enough of his lies and the pain
Your heart can no longer take the strain

Lay that beast to rest I say
And live to love another day

One day your true love will appear
And in your heart be forever dear


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
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1 posted 03-17-2000 07:25 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
Good advice, sweetie.
Hard for some to take at times, huh?
~*Marge*~


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Cerenity
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2 posted 03-17-2000 09:59 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi tracie,

WOW, There is so much truth in your words, the laying to rest part is so very hard to do thought.

Thank you,  Cerenity
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 03-17-2000 01:52 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

This is short and sweet! but sad, I know the feeling...when it isn't love!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


tracie66
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4 posted 03-17-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Dear all
These words were written for Shunshine in teen poetry, she has been having a rough time for a little while now and I've been looking after her you might say.
Some of this may seem a little harsh but I know the progress for which she has been transending through. I thought that now was an appropriate time to say "Hey sweetie you need to try to move on" I know it's terribly hard especially for a teenager to try to push through a one way romance and I hope she does.
LoL tracie
Thanks for your reply's



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
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5 posted 03-17-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~tracie

I really liked this a lot! Some wonderful words of wisdom and advice you have bestowed onto this friend of yours! She is lucky to have you. Great poem!

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
Ravenlearns2fly
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6 posted 03-17-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

Your poem was great! Sometimes we over look the love of a teen, as being not real. In truth Love at any age is always painfull it is but a lesson in life each must learn.
Raven

 
tracie66
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7 posted 03-17-2000 03:03 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Amy
Thanks for reading sweetie and for your lovely words
LoL
tracie
By the way I have a daughter named Amy, it's a lovely name I was originally going to spell it aimey but opted for the easiest way to spell it.
Bye

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


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tracie66
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Raven
thanks for reading
yes those teenage years are so tough emotionally and it all takes time.
LoL
Tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 03-17-2000 05:17 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

"Lay the beast to rest I say
And live to love another day"
What a wonderful phrase and good sound advice. I love it.
Liz
tracie66
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10 posted 03-18-2000 03:16 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

thanks Liz
I like those two lines as well
LoL tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 03-18-2000 08:57 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Tracie, very wise advice and a lot said in just a few words  
RainbowGirl
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12 posted 03-19-2000 06:12 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Tracie: Good advice..

HUGS

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

tracie66
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13 posted 03-20-2000 01:50 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

To Hoot and R.G
Thanks for your great comments, much appreciated.
Tracie  


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
mete out
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14 posted 03-21-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for mete out   Email mete out   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mete out

***tracie66,
I love this poem, so much said in a relatively short piece.
Beautiful.
Sunshine is lucky to have you.....


 I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it.

JamesMichael
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15 posted 03-21-2000 05:24 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Some very good advice for many of us. James
tracie66
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M.T & James
Thanks for your replies
I'm greatful to have her as a friend, we have become great e-mail buddies and it's great.
I must take this chance to say though that she e-mailed me today and say's that she doesn't bother posting her poetry much now because noone replies, maybe a few more of us can visit the teen poetry forum.
tracie

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
 
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