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A not so perfect garden..........a repost
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A not so perfect garden..........a repost |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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Sitting in my garden, staring at all the tree's Watching their branches swaying with the gentle breeze This day is such a glory, with colors oh so bright And the sky is palest blue, not a cloud is in sight I'm sitting in my garden wondering where you are Wondering what you're doing, have you travelled far Far, far away, not coming home to me So far away across the deep blue sea Pictured in a garden I see a face so blue Pictured in that garden is the face of you You're sitting in your garden, staring at the tree's Watching their leaves falling with the harshest breeze Your day is such a grey one, the clouds are rolling in A storm is a brewing and your day is oh so grim So sitting in our gardens, noone would ever guess That each of us is hurting, and our lives are such a mess Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi tracie66, This is beautiful, I like the way you made the two lives become one as it sounds you were in the past, Thank you, Cerenity |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi to you sweet cerenity I'm glad you like this, it's one of my favourite's just because I like the way it emotionally goes up and down. Thanks for your reply LoL Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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Ravenlearns2fly Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 71 |
Beauty poem! I really felt your emotion in your words. Look forward 2 reading more of your work. Raven |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Raven Thanks for your sweet words, much appreciated LoL tracie Keep all the windows of your mind open Anne Rooks |
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