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tracie66
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Victoria, Australia


0 posted 03-17-2000 06:14 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Sitting in my garden, staring at all the tree's
Watching their branches swaying with the gentle breeze
This day is such a glory, with colors oh so bright
And the sky is palest blue, not a cloud is in sight

I'm sitting in my garden wondering where you are
Wondering what you're doing, have you travelled far
Far, far away, not coming home to me
So far away across the deep blue sea

Pictured in a garden I see a face so blue
Pictured in that garden is the face of you
You're sitting in your garden, staring at the tree's
Watching their leaves falling with the harshest breeze

Your day is such a grey one, the clouds are rolling in
A storm is a brewing and your day is oh so grim

So sitting in our gardens, noone would ever guess
That each of us is hurting, and our lives are such a mess



 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Cerenity
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1 posted 03-17-2000 09:33 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi tracie66,

This is beautiful, I like the way you made the two lives become one as it sounds you were in the past,

Thank you, Cerenity
tracie66
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2 posted 03-17-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Hi to you sweet cerenity
I'm glad you like this, it's one of my favourite's just because I like the way it  emotionally goes up and down.
Thanks for your reply
LoL


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
Ravenlearns2fly
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3 posted 03-17-2000 03:08 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

Beauty poem! I really felt your emotion in your words. Look forward 2 reading more of your work.
Raven

 
tracie66
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Raven
Thanks for your sweet words, much appreciated
LoL
tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
 
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