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Dark Angel
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0 posted 03-17-2000 05:20 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Love Lost

Come..
save this soul
  don't let me
drown
  In love lost
     deep
as oceans wild

  of  valley's wide    
between
   hills, rustic
       ever valiant

never the
story ending
  like time, endless
      and infinite

but
fragile, similar
  to autumn leaves
         whisked away
crushed, scattered
    into..
   nothingness

Dark Angel
2000



 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge






[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 03-17-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
Enola
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1 posted 03-17-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Enola   Email Enola   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enola

Wow.  I hope someone does save you, if not, there may not be any more poetry like this, brilliant and beautiful.

 The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 03-17-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel~
You are penning some mighty fine
poetry from your soul, gal.
This is rendered with longing.
Magnificent.
~*Marge*~


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Cerenity
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3 posted 03-17-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Dark Angel,

This is wonderful, I like the way you compared loosing love, very well written.

Cerenity
Denise
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4 posted 03-17-2000 08:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad yet beautiful, well done, Dark Angel!

Denise
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5 posted 03-17-2000 08:30 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Tragically beautiful!
RainbowGirl
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6 posted 03-17-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

DA: Beautifully said..

HUSG

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 03-17-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Beautiful.....I know just how you feel.  Thanks for expressing it so well.
WhtDove
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8 posted 03-17-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Ya know I'm amazed at what you come up with when you're hurting. Awesome stuff!  I wish you weren't hurting, but I love the poetry girl  ~HUGS~
Severn
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9 posted 03-17-2000 10:48 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

One day Soul Sis you will write poems of joy...



Hugs - and wonderful poem.

Love K



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life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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10 posted 03-18-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Excellent DA. . . and yes, I know that in my heart, you will one day write poems of joy. . .

----------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

devina
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Surely someone is out there to save you hun...with writing as heart filled as this...they must all be running!!! Good luck!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

hoot_owl_rn
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DA...this is absolutely wonderful. Free verse at its finest  
Dark Angel
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Enola, thank you for your lovely reply
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Thank you so much Marge, so glad you like it  
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Cerenity, so glad you liked it   Thank you
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Thanks Denise  
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Sharon thank you  
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RG, Thanks Hon.  
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Lone Wolf thank you for your lovely reply  
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Angel, so glad you love what I come up with, thanks for your lovely reply.
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Sweet Butterfly, I look forward to that day   thanks so much for your lovely reply and I'm glad you like it.
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Thanks Sven  
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devina, thanks Hon  
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Ruth, thanks for your lovely reply and compliment.   *hugs hon*

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Butterflies_dont_cry
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14 posted 03-18-2000 06:10 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

This is beautiful.  You did a remarkable job!!!
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