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Goodbye

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teeny_greeny
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0 posted 03-17-2000 03:23 AM       View Profile for teeny_greeny   Email teeny_greeny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teeny_greeny

When I look upon these leaves
They represent a fleeting breeze
One that quickly came to town
and turned one child's life around
But now that it has changed this girl
It has left her alone in an empty world
Just as quickly as it came,
It left with a dreary bout of rain
Yet every time I touch these leaves
I'll think of you my lovely breeze.
© Copyright 2000 Stephie - All Rights Reserved
BluesforNarada
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1 posted 03-17-2000 04:42 AM       View Profile for BluesforNarada   Email BluesforNarada   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesforNarada

What a beautiful poem. From the heart, and just shows what a child would feel at that period in time. Short is definately beautiful in this case.
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2 posted 03-17-2000 08:28 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very beautiful!

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I like this much  
Mistikman
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4 posted 03-18-2000 04:41 PM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

Great poem, I know someone who just recently did this to me, not a comfortable feeling, to say the least, not necessarily bad though.
 
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