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My Only Crime !!!!

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Chico
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0 posted 03-17-2000 12:45 AM       View Profile for Chico   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chico

My only crime !!!

I know I'd die for you;
  if just given the chance.
just hoping that I might;
  catch the slightest little glance.
And in that last instant;
  before life and death.
That you would be there present,
  To hear my last breath.
And that on you lips;
  Would be my name.
As your tear drips;
  on my quivering frame.
That you would hold me tight;
  And ask me why.
And tell me It's not right;
  That I should die.
But in the wanning time;
  I would Smile and be tough.
Knowing that my only crime;
  Was not loving you enough...

I love you Avei...

© Copyright 2000 Chico - All Rights Reserved
teeny_greeny
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since 03-04-2000
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1 posted 03-17-2000 02:41 AM       View Profile for teeny_greeny   Email teeny_greeny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teeny_greeny

wow!!! that was awesome.... I could feel your love in your words...you express yourself wonderfully. Whoever you wrote this about is lucky to have you, and I hope they appreciate you as much as you do them
JamesMichael
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2 posted 03-17-2000 06:26 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Very romantic..I enjoyed reading this. James
Cerenity
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3 posted 03-17-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi Chico,

This so beautiful, with words like this it does not seem you have comitted any crime.

Thank you,  Cerenity
 
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