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Beautiful She Is

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Sven
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0 posted 03-16-2000 10:32 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Beautiful she is to me
An island of loveliness in humanity's sea
An artist's vision with eyes of blue and hair of gold
Her face I long to touch, her body I long to hold.

She moves with grace and beauty, like a swan on the lake
And when she speaks, her voice echoes in my ears, and makes my legs quake
Her smile is like a sky full of a thousand stars
And her eyes are like beacons of light, shining from afar.

Beautiful she is to me
And beauty's vision she'll always be
I'll never cease to tell her, I'll always feel this way
A work of art she'll be to me, each and every day.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 03-16-2000 10:37 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Sven,
*deep breath* This is beautiful, words of a man in love with life and someone very inspiring...
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2 posted 03-16-2000 10:44 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Beautiful, this is to read.

~ Claire
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 03-16-2000 10:46 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sven,
Good words, good thoughts, Good poem. Enjoyed the read.
devina
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4 posted 03-17-2000 12:47 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Lovely thoughts Sven....

just lovely explains how much I liked this one!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

teeny_greeny
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5 posted 03-17-2000 02:38 AM       View Profile for teeny_greeny   Email teeny_greeny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teeny_greeny

I really liked this poem. I love your style. It is similar to the style and rhythm I use. It was a beutiful poem....All I can say is that I wish someone felt that way about me...  
JamesMichael
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6 posted 03-17-2000 06:39 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Beautiful writing Sven...it seems you are captivated by some lovely maidens charms.  James
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7 posted 03-17-2000 06:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Sven~
Such ardent beauty in your work.
Lovely to see the love you feel
grace the page.
~*Marge*~


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8 posted 03-17-2000 07:39 AM       View Profile for StarrGazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StarrGazer

Sven-very very beautiful Great job !!!  printing this out now ... ty  

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~


Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 03-17-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

If she is beautiful to you, she is beautiful to the world, and she will fell as such if she reads your poetry. It is splendid and romantic.
liz
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10 posted 03-17-2000 11:44 AM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

She is very lucky to have someone feel this way about her--lovely poem!
Marina
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11 posted 03-17-2000 12:01 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven: Only someone who is truly beautiful themselves can see such beauty in others!  I truly beautiful poem, for such a lucky lady.

Marina
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12 posted 03-17-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Sven

Your writing always makes me *sigh* and takes my breath away. I agree what a lucky lady "she" is!! I also agree that to know inner and true beauty, one has to have it within themself...and you seem to have it in spades, my friend. I am touched as I am sure all the rest of the members of Passions that you share this poem and others with us. Thank you!
AMY  

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Danny Holloway
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13 posted 03-17-2000 05:00 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

I like the line "an island of loveliness in humanity's sea".
Beautiful poem Sven!
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14 posted 03-17-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

This is so beautiful Sven, so flattering that you feel so much and see so much physically and emotionally.  She is a lucky lady to be thought of this way...  As usual my friend your words and love never lack  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Corinne
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Oh, Sven,

you are truly one romantic guy!

And a very talented poet, too!

Corinne
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16 posted 03-17-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Sven....very nice poem.  Well written.  Your wife must be very lucky!!!!!
Denise
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17 posted 03-17-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is very lovely, Sven!

Denise
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18 posted 03-18-2000 12:51 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Thank you all. . .

Butterfly--yes, I am. . .

Meadowmuse--thank you. . .

Sy--glad that you liked sir. . .

Devina--A woman of few words, thank you...

Teeny Greeny--Glad that we share the same style, and I'm sure someone feels this way about you. . .

jmlee--Is it really that apparent?

Marge--Glad to see that you can see what I see. . .

StarrGazer--thank you, and thank you for the print, I hope that you hold on to this one. .

Liz--Thank you my friend, yes, she is beautiful to the world. . . and to me. . . and I hope that she feels it too. . .

Martie--yes, she is. .

Marina--thank you for the compliment, we're all beautiful in our own ways. . .

Aimster--you took MY breath away with your response!! Thank you!!

Danny--Thanks my friend. . .

Isis--thank you, I know that you understand. . . you know that my sight is not just limited to the outside. . .

Corinne--I was born "Romantic" I think!!

Lone Wolf--Thank you. . .

Denise--Glad that you enjoyed. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Dark Angel
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19 posted 03-18-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sven beautiful and romantic this is, Excellent work.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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