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Beautiful She Is
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Beautiful She Is |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Beautiful she is to me An island of loveliness in humanity's sea An artist's vision with eyes of blue and hair of gold Her face I long to touch, her body I long to hold. She moves with grace and beauty, like a swan on the lake And when she speaks, her voice echoes in my ears, and makes my legs quake Her smile is like a sky full of a thousand stars And her eyes are like beacons of light, shining from afar. Beautiful she is to me And beauty's vision she'll always be I'll never cease to tell her, I'll always feel this way A work of art she'll be to me, each and every day. --------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sven, *deep breath* This is beautiful, words of a man in love with life and someone very inspiring...  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Beautiful, this is to read. ~ Claire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, Good words, good thoughts, Good poem. Enjoyed the read. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Lovely thoughts Sven.... just lovely explains how much I liked this one!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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teeny_greeny New Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 6Canada |
I really liked this poem. I love your style. It is similar to the style and rhythm I use. It was a beutiful poem....All I can say is that I wish someone felt that way about me... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful writing Sven...it seems you are captivated by some lovely maidens charms. James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ Such ardent beauty in your work. Lovely to see the love you feel grace the page. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Sven-very very beautiful Great job !!! printing this out now ... ty ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
If she is beautiful to you, she is beautiful to the world, and she will fell as such if she reads your poetry. It is splendid and romantic. liz |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
She is very lucky to have someone feel this way about her--lovely poem! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Sven: Only someone who is truly beautiful themselves can see such beauty in others! I truly beautiful poem, for such a lucky lady. Marina |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sven Your writing always makes me *sigh* and takes my breath away. I agree what a lucky lady "she" is!! I also agree that to know inner and true beauty, one has to have it within themself...and you seem to have it in spades, my friend. I am touched as I am sure all the rest of the members of Passions that you share this poem and others with us. Thank you! AMY ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I like the line "an island of loveliness in humanity's sea". Beautiful poem Sven! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This is so beautiful Sven, so flattering that you feel so much and see so much physically and emotionally. She is a lucky lady to be thought of this way... As usual my friend your words and love never lack May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Oh, Sven, you are truly one romantic guy! And a very talented poet, too! Corinne |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven....very nice poem. Well written. Your wife must be very lucky!!!!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very lovely, Sven! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . Butterfly--yes, I am. . . Meadowmuse--thank you. . . Sy--glad that you liked sir. . . Devina--A woman of few words, thank you... Teeny Greeny--Glad that we share the same style, and I'm sure someone feels this way about you. . . jmlee--Is it really that apparent? Marge--Glad to see that you can see what I see. . . StarrGazer--thank you, and thank you for the print, I hope that you hold on to this one. . Liz--Thank you my friend, yes, she is beautiful to the world. . . and to me. . . and I hope that she feels it too. . . Martie--yes, she is. . Marina--thank you for the compliment, we're all beautiful in our own ways. . . Aimster--you took MY breath away with your response!! Thank you!! Danny--Thanks my friend. . . Isis--thank you, I know that you understand. . . you know that my sight is not just limited to the outside. . . Corinne--I was born "Romantic" I think!! Lone Wolf--Thank you. . . Denise--Glad that you enjoyed. . . ------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sven beautiful and romantic this is, Excellent work. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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