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The StarrGazer--Challenge #2

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Sven
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0 posted 03-16-2000 10:28 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Sven

Look deeply into my eyes dear one
For they hold the secrets of the stars
I have seen the brightest galaxies,
     Beheld the farthest suns
But the beauty of your face, my love
     Outshines them all by far.

I have walked along the shores of alien oceans
And sailed on the vast celestial sea
I have seen the moons of Shandell
     And drunk deeply of love's potions
But never before and never again
     Will beauty like yours speak to me.

Come and gaze at me upon the stars my love
All their secrets to your heart I will tell
I will be gazing at your face
     While you look at the stars above
And together we will fly, hand in hand
     And heart in heart as well.

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 03-16-2000 11:16 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is great Sven! Sort of a sci-fi love poem!  
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2 posted 03-17-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This is sort of like the futuristic romances I've read!! I really really loved this Sven...gentle as it was!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

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3 posted 03-17-2000 12:15 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

An original piece from an original poet! Is there no end to your talents?

Marina
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4 posted 03-17-2000 09:16 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

How romantic.....wow.....sigh.
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5 posted 03-17-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for StarrGazer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for StarrGazer

Sven this is beautiful, wonderful, I love it !!! thanks           five smiley face rating !!!

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~


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6 posted 03-17-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very romantic! You're good at these challenges, Sven!

Denise
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7 posted 03-18-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

I gotta hand it to you Sven, you really wrote an awesome piece here...look at all the women swooning....LOL
Sven
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8 posted 03-18-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

StarrGazer. . . glad that you liked. . . and I'm am quite honored to recieve your highest rating!!

DeVine--yes, it is kind of Sci-fi isn't it?

Devina--I have read those futuristic romances too. . . I love them so. . .

Marina--Thank you, if you keep up your compliments, I'll get a big head!!  LOL

Lone Wolf--Thank you. . . and welcome to our family. . .

Denise--Like I've always said, I love a challenge. . .

JML--thanks for the compliment. . .and I don't know that all these women are swooning, perhaps it's just the wine that I served!!  LOL

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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9 posted 03-18-2000 12:37 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

That was the desired effect...however that's in Adult!!!


Marina
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10 posted 03-18-2000 12:48 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

You will find a new post there now.  That is if you can handle it!!

Marina
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11 posted 03-19-2000 12:57 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Marina,
       I saw it and yes, I did handle it, but were you able to handle the one that I put there?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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