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Marina
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0 posted 03-16-2000 09:20 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Marina

So PleaseÖGo To Hell!


Wake up to reality
And stop your dreaming
Take that chip off you shoulder
Because Iím a survivor, you best be believing

I donít need you anymore
I can finally stand my ground
You didnít break me
Self-confidence is what Iíve found

You thought you could control me
But Iíve got this newfound feeling
So out of my way
Iím going dancing on the ceiling!

Donít you know what Iím tying to say?
Canít you tell?
Iíll try and be polite
So pleaseÖ..GO TO HELL!!!

Marina Mar 16/2000

© Copyright 2000 Marina Crossley - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 03-16-2000 10:17 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

You tell them Marina!!!  

I really like this one, it says what I think we've all felt like saying to someone who we have had it with at one time or another. . .

Excellent!!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 03-16-2000 10:33 PM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

Marina,
This is excellent.  You expressed such strength!!...wish I could be that bold...lol   Thanks so much for sharing it!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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You Go Girl!!
devina
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4 posted 03-17-2000 12:23 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I love the way you said "please" go to hell LOL...this was a great show of self power hun...keep it up!!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Aimster
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5 posted 03-17-2000 12:31 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

YOU GO GIRLFRIEND!! I really liked this one....powerful message and inspiration for us all! Great job!

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
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6 posted 03-17-2000 01:57 AM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

Excellent!!! You let 'em know in no uncertain terms that you are strong!!!

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho


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7 posted 03-17-2000 06:32 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Really cool...I loved the last few lines..."I'll try and be polite...so please...go to hell"!!!
Marina
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8 posted 03-17-2000 12:31 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven, thank you. Ex's have a way of bringing out the best in us sometimes!

Butterflies: thanks,but it took me a long time to get here.

Ruth,thanks

devina: thank you and believe me I will!

Amy and Wildchild: thanks for you comments.

James: thanks, the last line is my favourite too!

Marina
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9 posted 03-17-2000 12:50 PM       View Profile for INclan   Email INclan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for INclan

Marina,

I pitty the man who lost such a gem as you. Strong poem....Great!

INclan
Marina
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10 posted 03-17-2000 07:03 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

INclan, your very sweet. Thank you very much for your compliments.

Marina
doreen peri
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WOOHOO!



YES!!!!
Congratulations! You have arrived! Great sentiment! hehe
Marina
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12 posted 03-18-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Doreen: thank you, you have no idea how good it feels to finally speeak these words!

Marina
Sven
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Marina---not just Ex's--

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Parker
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Marina, this is so blunt, some guys just don't get the message. Stay strong.

James
doreen peri
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Marina-

if anyone knows how good it feels to speak those words... 'tis moi!

Again, congratulations! I always feel some kind of comeraderie and elation when I see a woman finally empowered by her own sense of who she is... I know you are proud (as you should be) and probably relieved... feeling this, then writing it is a definitive step toward what I know will be your bright tomorrow!! Claim it!

-doreen

"Life is short... Let's be honest with each other- doreen peri"
Marina
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16 posted 03-18-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Sven your prabably right.

James,your right some guys don't...parcilarly this one.  But that's Ok , he doesn't know who he's dealing with now!

Doreen, thank again for replying.  I'm sorry you had to go through a similiar situlation.  However like you said it feels great to be strong and finally stand up for yourself.

Marina

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17 posted 03-18-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Marina: It's a bit like giving birth, such a relief when it's all over...

HUGS
Marina
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18 posted 03-19-2000 04:07 AM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

RainbowGirl your prabably right.  I don't have any kids but if giving birth is this painful, I can do just about anything!

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