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Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 2000-03-16 06:41 PM


Through the silvered hazy skein,
and within the tapestry of a memory
of a dream
   broken
by the light of yon sun
shining down
lighting upon
gazing on
caressing
my face to wakefuness’ call…



breathe

Through the silvered hazy skein,
and within the tapestry of a memory
of a dream was seen
mine eyes

   the sea

green as the sea
grey storm
roiling and crashing
fury un-pent against the solid
earthen, rocky brown
your eyes

   the peak’ed rocky shore

I (sea) – driven by crested
urgency to touch with
hundreds, nay, thousands of
froth’ed tendrils
cleansing waters spilling
upon where you reside
stoic’ly inclined

And met together in perfect
fit where boundaries
join two un-likes to like
in a single
connection
made




 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-03-16 07:32 PM


Oh, how lovely! Your imagery here is perfect!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
2 posted 2000-03-16 08:13 PM


Whew!  Awesome work, satiate.  Absolutely love the imagery and the allusion.  You need to keep that pen in hand a bit more, me thinks.


Michael

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