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The Angel In The Red Dress

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tnat
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0 posted 03-16-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for tnat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for tnat

The Angel In The Red Dress

An angel came to visit
In the middle of the night.
She said, "Take me by my little hand.
I will lead you to the light."

This lovely little angel
In a beautiful red dress,
Said, "Your worries now are over.
I will take care of the rest."

As I took her by her little hand,
I heard the angel say.
"There is nothing to be scared of.
Let me show you the way."

We strolled through a beautiful meadow.
With flowers of every hue.
Above it was the clearest sky,
A peaceful shade of blue.

We came upon some mountains,
Majestic as can be.
And when we reached the other side,
A gentle, calming sea.

We rode the ocean for a while.
The way was clear and bright.
Until we reached our destiny,
A pearly gate of white.

Saint Peter stood before us.
The keeper of the gate.
"There is no doubt about this soul.
You shall not have to wait."

The gates began to open,
And much to my surprise.
GOD's great and mighty kingdom
Was right before my eyes.

In the kingdom, with arms open wide,
Were loved ones from my past.
And the angel in the red dress said,
"I have fulfilled my task."

Another soul delivered
By a tiny little hand.
The angel in the red dress
Led you to the promised land.


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RainbowGirl
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1 posted 03-16-2000 01:33 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

WOW!!!..I love it...Brought a peaceful smile to this lady's face..

HUGS

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

Marilyn
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2 posted 03-16-2000 02:55 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

Welcome to Passions. What a beautiful and inspirational piece. Thankyou.  
JamesMichael
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3 posted 03-16-2000 03:55 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

tnat this is a lovely poem...thank God that some angels wear red dresses cause I love the color red.   James
Ravenlearns2fly
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4 posted 03-16-2000 04:48 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

I really loved this poem!!!!!

 
Pepper
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This is a lovely poem tnat ... I too, was left with a feeling of piece ...
Welcome to Passions ....  

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon





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6 posted 03-16-2000 05:38 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Welcome to Passions, tnat..

I'm not sure how you're going to top this work with another, as you seem to have begun at the end - But I'll look forward to your next posting...

Check your email for a special greeting..
Martie
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7 posted 03-16-2000 06:14 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

What a beautiful poem!  Welcome
Cerenity
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8 posted 03-16-2000 08:42 PM       View Profile for Cerenity   Email Cerenity   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cerenity

Hi tnat,

You gave me goose bumps, this is so wonderful, thank you so much for sharing it.

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Cerenity
BluesforNarada
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9 posted 03-17-2000 05:23 AM       View Profile for BluesforNarada   Email BluesforNarada   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesforNarada

Very eloquently written. It gave me the shivers because it was as good as an writings from the angels.  Keep up the good work - let's see more of this beautiful style!
 
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