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Marge Tindal
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~*~

Bird sits on power line
Singing his little heart out
Electrifying

~*~


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Marge, your title expresses my feeling exactly...love to you from me.
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*From the Vegetarian*

AH!!!! That's so sad! (but it's cute)

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Hi Marge,

I like this alot, you sing so well.


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Applauding  
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Martie~
Right back at 'cha, hon.  

LoveBug~
Sweetie ... his SONG is ELECTRIFYING ...
not electrified !  LOL !  

Cerenity~
Thank you, sweet one.

Hoot~
You send smiles my way !  

~*Marge*~


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Marge
I love the way you see the world around you!!!
Raven

 
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Ah! Margie, lass, an' wha' in the worl am I to do with ye? A bonnie bit of drollery. Aye, it is!
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Oh, my bad! Good thing for the bird, though...  

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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Raven~
Thanks, love.  
Was walking in the yard and there the little thing was ... just waiting to be written !

Aye ! Slinger~
Tis a question I've been wondering
about also.  
Thank you, cowboy!
Love ya'

LoveBugger~
Glad to see that smile !  
~*Marge*~



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This is cute, Marge! My mind at first saw 'electrified' too. Time to get new glasses!

Denise
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Denise~
Just a little Haiku
from the heart of a bird lover.
Glad you enjoyed.
LOL on the glasses.
~*Marge*~


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~Marge
This is tiny but oh so sweet
LoL tracie


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Tracie~
Thank you.
It's a Haiku and tiny is the definitive.
Try one.
It's written with 5 syllables in first line.
7 in the second.
and 5 in the third.
It should follow the traditional
Japanese form of relating to nature
or a sudden event that catches you
by surprise and gives you joy.
E-mail me if you have any questions.
For tonight I'm outta here.
But will respond on the morning.
Well .... sometime before noon.
~*Marge*~


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