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kaile
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0 posted 03-16-2000 04:51 AM       View Profile for kaile   Email kaile   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for kaile

Yellow Paint on Brown Terrier

Broad bright strokes engulf
Indignant.Pity.Helpless
Damn that pervert guy!


Q:IS bold a better word for broad?pls give ur comments thax
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Kaile,

Both words work equally well.  It all depends upon what you are trying to say.  I am trying to determine is the pervert is a person or a dog.  Maybe they are one and the same....lol. Thanx for posting....it made me think.

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it was actually my friend who did this to the dog.....
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WHO on earth paints a dog for goodness sake?! I thought this only happens in moves (like Meet the Parents) haha  

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