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~A Lonely Knights Plea~

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


0 posted 03-16-2000 03:57 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Oh, my brave knight,My warrior, My prince,
Loneliness shall leave your soul,
No more pain must thee bare,

For Your queen has heard thy cry,
A Thousand pardons unto thy heart,
Within thy arms I shall comfort thee,

Alone shall only be spoken,
Where you and I are,
Where loves' passion is unbroken,

Amidst the dreams we behold,
Amidst the heavens and the stars,
Amidst the loves stories to be told,

For I shall wipe away thy tears,
Thy heart has shown much sorrow,
I shall bring thee hope for our tomorrow,

Oh my love, my sweet love,
Thou are not lonely no more,
For your maiden awaits thee,

To give thee love as never before,
Lonely is not thy heart,
It is set free,

I answer thy call, to the heart,
of Thy lonely Knights Plea.




 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

© Copyright 2000 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Loneheart
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1 posted 03-16-2000 08:49 AM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Unsurpassed in beauty is thy Verse
Fair maid  
I truly feel this is worthy of great reviews for it  touches ones soul indeed  

Where Love lives not  Darkness avail's



 Loneheart
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 03-16-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

To touch thy soul,
I have accomplished my task,

For it was written for a knight,
who said thy beauty in verse is unsurpassed!!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


Parker
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... the old black rum


3 posted 03-17-2000 03:57 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

A Romantic Heart,

Oh my love, my sweet love,
Thou are not lonely no more,
For your maiden awaits thee,

this is such a lovely verse,
such loveing passion and
dedication to thy love,
your are such a romantic poet,
and your write with such flare,
I really enjoy reading your verse.

Parker
angelswing
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4 posted 03-17-2000 04:55 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

Wow, and I thought it couldn't get any better than your last poem, it's great, you are a poetic genious, I love the way that your poetry flows . L.Of.L . Tom .

 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 03-17-2000 05:22 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is a beautful verse and I assure you it is going to touch many Knights or now wanna be Knights hearts  
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 03-17-2000 05:51 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Parker you do have a way with words!more than poetry itself!Thank you!!!! Your too kind!

Tom:I am humbled by your compliments, That I am not worthy of...   Glad it touched you!!

Hoot:Thanks for the compliment!Haha...wanna be...let's have a course in knighthood...sign up sheet......
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 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare




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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart


7 posted 03-17-2000 02:10 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Did You ever know that your my hero....
Your everything I wish I could be...
and I can fly higher than an eagle....
Cause you are the wind beneath my wings!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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