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A Romantic Heart
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0 posted 03-16-2000 02:35 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for A Romantic Heart

ENCHANTED GARDEN

The moon is shinning upon thy face,
As I meet thee in this place,

Where lovers kisses are evermore,
Love hidden, desires explore,

Enchanted I am by thee,
Whose heart has set this maiden free,

Words of thy love,
I am captured in thy trance,

Dreams, fairy tales,
Passionate romance,

The moonlight glow,
Shines upon your eyes,

Where thy love flickers,
As though it were fireflies,

As I am filled with passions cup,
To taste of thy love,

One kiss of thee is not enough,
Thy touches are soft,

Thy voice is a whisper in thy ear,
So sweet is thy love, love without fear,

I see the roses in your garden,
How lovely they grow,

From the feeding of thy words,
words of love bestowed,

I see your dreams inside your garden,
Dreams That I also have dreamed,

A Kingdom looking for its king,
A king looking for his queen,

Where knights are brave,
Fair maidens are slaves,
To love at no cost,

Enchanted Garden I am amazed,
Inside your poets poems I am forever lost,

I will meet thee inside this passionate Garden,
Where there is no day, nor night,

Forever, my love,
Danceing to loves sway,

Into the pale moonlight,
Where love is never a pardon,
This, my love, is forever our enchanted garden.






 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

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1 posted 03-16-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

RomanticHeart~
Enchanted indeed.

'Into the pale moonlight,
Where love is never a pardon,
This, my love, is forever our enchanted garden.'

Such beautiful thoughts.
~*Marge*~


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A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 03-16-2000 05:06 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Thank you Marge!!!!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


JamesMichael
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3 posted 03-16-2000 05:15 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Truly a place which I would like to visit...and as I read your poetry for just a few moments I am...in your enchanted garden.  "One kiss is not enough..so sweet is thy love".   James
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4 posted 03-16-2000 02:18 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Tis so sweet a reply sweet James!
You are welcome to visit my enchanted Garden!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


Parker
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5 posted 03-17-2000 04:05 AM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

A Romantic Heart, your are lost in romance heaven. This poem is so sweet, you have such a victorian feel to your poetry.
Your words seem to relate to me very well, I really enjoy reading your verse.

Parker
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6 posted 03-17-2000 04:46 AM       View Profile for angelswing   Email angelswing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angelswing

A romantic heart you certainly do have, your poetry is great, and I, like you love to write about love, it touches our hearts, and forms links for life . Great poem, show me more . L.Of.L . Tom .

 With poetry as your weapon - express your iner feelings so all may carry your sorrow, united as one .
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7 posted 03-17-2000 05:43 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Parker:irionic, but I have always felt like I was from the victorian days or the Ren. period! Glad you enjoyed the poem!Thanks for the sweet reply!!!

AngelsWing:I like the name,Love is always my theme, I don't know why, but I just feel so passionate about it that I have to express myself through poetry....Thanks for your sweet compliments!

Sometimes I feel like the Goddess of love(Not being boastful) but it seems love is all I can write about....anyone else feel this way?


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


tracie66
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8 posted 03-17-2000 06:30 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

This was most wonderful to read
I enjoyed every bit to last word
You are most talented
Tracie  


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Loneheart
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9 posted 03-17-2000 10:18 AM       View Profile for Loneheart   Email Loneheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Loneheart's Home Page   View IP for Loneheart

Love's garden beckons All Within its walls
Tis but a shame so few will enter
A beautiful princess's dreams may they all come true
Such a lovely poem

Loneheart



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10 posted 03-17-2000 01:46 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Tracie I am just expressing my dreams, my heart, letting it flow....You are most welcome here at passions!!!! Thanks for the nice compliment But I am surrounded by talent and inspiration from poets like you and all that are on passions!

Lone heart:After reading much of your poetry,this princess's dreams have came true,for I never knew your kind of poetry still existed, You inspire me!!! Me thinks you have found the key to this garden!


 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


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11 posted 03-17-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for Ravenlearns2fly   Email Ravenlearns2fly   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ravenlearns2fly

Breath taking your words take me away to another place and time.
Raven

 
A Romantic Heart
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12 posted 03-18-2000 04:28 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Raven Thank you! I am glad to take you on that journey!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare


christies heart
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13 posted 03-18-2000 04:47 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

Very lovely and inspiring  

 Grant that I may not judge my niegbor until I have walked a mile in his moccasians

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A Romantic Heart
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14 posted 03-18-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

glad to have inspired you Christie! Thanks for reading!

 "Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove.
O,no! it is an ever-fixed mark....William Shakespeare

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