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Temptress
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0 posted 2000-03-16 02:17 AM



Enchanting am I?
You say so with a blush, sir,
And I equally share that color.
While the wisteria drifts,
On the Spring breeze,
Its perfume surrounds us
Like the heavy tension
Of a windy kiss.
My smile and yours
Drifts in and out
Between the dusty southern sun rays
Which float
Crowning the damp ground
In a glorious halo.
The season causes my babbling.

© Copyright 2000 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-03-16 02:18 AM


sigh very pretty temptress
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 2000-03-16 11:52 AM


Enchanting so
Her poetry
Put on display
For all to see
She speaks of spring
Suns golden rays
And makes me long
For warmer days

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-03-16 04:05 PM


A very lovely and enchanting poem...James
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4 posted 2000-03-16 04:55 PM


Please babble on, Temptress! Your writing is rich in flavor and life.  
Denise
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5 posted 2000-03-17 08:11 PM


Very beautiful poem!  

Denise

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6 posted 2000-03-17 09:21 PM


Temptress~
Lovely. Just lovely.
~*Marge*~


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Nan
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7 posted 2000-03-18 07:53 AM


Nice to see you posting, Temptress... Now if you could just send some of that spring weather to the northeast, I'll be even happier with you...
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8 posted 2001-02-25 03:54 PM


quote:
Enchanting am I?


Enchanting you are!!!!    

Wonderful. . .

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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