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If You Were my Girl

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G. A. Webb
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0 posted 03-15-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for G. A. Webb

If you were my girl there are so many things that I would love to do
I'd open my heart to make a new start to prove my love for you
I'd climb a tall peak and tell all the land how you set my heart a whirl
And I'd do so much more with a gleam in my eye if only you were my girl

If you were my girl a shower of love is all that you would see
I'd do different things like push you in swings because you'd mean that much to me
I know in your arms is where I would find my troubles would unfurl
And I'd sleep good at night consumed with delight with the thought of you as my girl

If you were my girl I know we would share a love that would out last time
It would be so awesome to watch our love blossom like the words within this rhyme
I would be so weak as to sneak a peek at your beauty my wonderful pearl
And lost in love I would be with thee if you chose to be my girl

G. A. Webb


 Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

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G. A. Webb
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1 posted 03-15-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Hi all. Just to set the record straight, I did not write this for anybody. I did it just to prove to myself that I still could write love poems. That's what made this one so hard to write because I have no love inspiration to go by. I have written so many anti-love poems as of late that I thought that I couldn't write a positive one again. I'll admit that it's not my best work, but maybe one day when I find love again I'll be able to write one that is better. Anyways, I hope you like it. Thank you.

G

 Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

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2 posted 03-15-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

G.A.~
Sweetheart .... you'll have NO trouble getting her attention with 'sigh-makers' like this !
Loved it !
~*Marge*~


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PhaerieChild
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3 posted 03-15-2000 11:02 PM       View Profile for PhaerieChild   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PhaerieChild

G.
I for one really like it! It's sweet and romantic and light enough to be handled and not scare the girl away, yet serious enough to let her know that she is welcome to stay. I think it's wonderful. BTW love the pic! Had to zoom in 3 times to get a good look! Cute kids too. Thanks for the read.

 Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
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NewbiePoetGuy
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4 posted 03-15-2000 11:10 PM       View Profile for NewbiePoetGuy   Email NewbiePoetGuy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit NewbiePoetGuy's Home Page   View IP for NewbiePoetGuy

Very Good Poem, I loved it.
This really was one of those poems that makes me think of every love ive ever had and lost to uncontrollable circumstances, thanks for the read keep up the good writing
Larry
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5 posted 03-15-2000 11:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You could have fooled me! This is great! Sure sounds like a man in love to me! (save it to give to that special one when she comes along!)

Denise
G. A. Webb
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6 posted 03-16-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

Thank you all so much for your kind words. Hopefully one day I'll find that special some one to give this to, wish me luck. But in the mean time I think I'll hang on to it. Thanks again!

G

 Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Severn
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7 posted 03-16-2000 12:45 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is so nice...it really is.

Well done!

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath
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8 posted 03-16-2000 01:37 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I read this with almost a nostalgic aire...I do enjoy the innocence and sincerity that this piece offers. And as for your post script, I can relate.  

~ Claire
Glorfindel
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9 posted 03-16-2000 04:35 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

Well, if this is what you write withOUT inspiration, LOOK OUT when it comes along!!

Good stuff.

Glorf.
Glorfindel
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10 posted 03-16-2000 04:35 AM       View Profile for Glorfindel   Email Glorfindel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Glorfindel

Well, if this is what you write withOUT inspiration, LOOK OUT when it comes along!!

Good stuff.

Glorf.

 Let winds rage, seas boil and years curse,
My love shal live everyoung in my verse.
JamesMichael
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11 posted 03-16-2000 06:07 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Hey G.A.Webb almost every girl I meet I fall in love with so I have plenty of inspiration...but I didn't say that they fall in love with me...so I have plenty of frustration.  I'm getting lots of practice anyway.   I feel a lot like that old song sometimes "I'll Never Fall In Love Again."   James
G. A. Webb
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12 posted 03-16-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for G. A. Webb   Email G. A. Webb   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for G. A. Webb

WOW! I really didn't expect this kind of a responce on a piece that I thought was OK at best. Thank you all very much!!! I'm glad you liked it.  

G

 Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't

Aimster
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13 posted 03-17-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

G-

I just came across this one, and like it, I did!! I thought this was very romantic and sweet. Save it for the girl who captures your heart, and is worth of you! Best of luck to you hon. Take care,

AMY

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
RainbowGirl
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14 posted 03-17-2000 08:32 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

"I did not write this for anybody"....shucks, and there was me about to try on the shoe to see if it fitted....

HUGS

 I love the way I look in your eyes, I'm just me tho'...
We are all works in progress, no?

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15 posted 06-17-2005 07:35 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

goodness...you are sooooo sweet...very nicely done G
 
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