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To the Critic.........
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To the Critic......... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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If I were writing poetry for class I would expect to get some kind of grade And possibly, I would or would not pass Depending on the effort I had made. If I were writing verse to win a prize I'd pay attention to each dot and dash No error would escape my watchful eyes And maybe I would win a little cash. But I am simply writing here to friends Kind people here that I have come to know And whether I am good or not depends On what I have to say and not the flow. So if my poetry is not correct Small comments do not interest me because I'm writing for the people I respect Who judge me for my heart and not the flaws. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Very well put Balladeer!! I write for myself and for those I consider friends. I have enough critics in my life. I sure don't need another one. Love it!!! Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, You are a whole deck of cards. Love your poem. Stay well and love to Franni. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Amen - the truest test of any poem is how it touches the heart. Very well said. Michael |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, Deer... I've noticed you haven't been in class... You must be hanging around out here in the OPEN with all your friends then... I see how it is.. Course I personally think that ALL of your poems are perfect already..  Tell me when you want critique - I'll send you over to Critical Analysis and sic Brad & jbouder on ya.... [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great words come from the heart! As this did, Great Balladeer! Words so true. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I think I can name one critic to the death...but I won't start anything...this poem totally reflected my mood at the moment...I hope the critic reads it!!! Thanks deer!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ YES ! And if you get bboogged down ... call a tow truck !  YES ! Love you to pieces ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I'll say it again...I read with my heart not my head! Your poetry is always flawless because it touches my heart....... [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This one hits the mark!!!! Perrrrrrrrrfect  |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Balladeer ... sorry to rain on your parade here and act like a critic ... but ... while we're on the subject ... I think you should unstraighten you tie a little ... so that you look a bit less presentable Rex}<{{{{o> |
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bboog Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 303Valencia, California |
This comment has been removed as per profanity. Please check the forum guidelines or feel free to email me if you have any questions on this, bboog. Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 03-15-2000).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Bal:..I couldn't agree with you more, there is a time and a place for criticism and Open is not the place and although I don't mind anyone giving suggestions to anything I write, I realised a few moments ago that "what is said" can offend other people, I received mail a short time ago where someone was really upset on my behalf because bboog suggested an alteration and I'm sat here dumbfounded at the above post (may have changed as I'm debating this post....*sigh* I know I get cheesed off when reading another author's work if someone is not very diplomatic (hmmm) but never really thought of it in relation to my work as they are mostly thoughts that I post and not any great works or anything...but this person was my sister and she is upset...and I signed on just now and read this piece of yours, really made me think even more about how others read all our comments and how soemtimes we just don't know what is going on in the background... My apologies, delete this if I'm out of order, guess I'm a little bit sad that someone got hurt unnecessarily... HUSG |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
ROFL! I love it! Cor |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Heart to heart.....I think that is the only writing that really matters! This is wonderful Balladeer! I couldn't have said it any better! Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Thank you all for your comments and agreement. Rainbow.....out of order? You are beautiful....and your poetry is beautiful BECAUSE you are beautiful. Nan...CA Forum? No way! Those guys are too tough for me!!!  |
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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
thanks for saying it. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hmmmm...good points 'deer. Might I suggest that... ROTFLMAO! 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Balladeer: I can always count on you to say what needs to be said... and package it in a great poem. I was more than ready to screech and holler at a self-appointed Poetry God... thanks for letting me keep what little dignity I have. *G* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you Deer, you are the best----I was wondering how to express my dismay and now you have done it for me. XXXOOO |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
There ya go! What Deere said... yep! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
You GO!!!! Love it |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Thank you 'Deer !!!! I think most of us here share these feelings ..... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Believe me I appreciate the acceptance here after posting a few in critical analysis. I know that if I posted my poems in a poetry contest or submitted them for publication I would be found lacking in many respects. This is a nice forum to write from your heart and all levels of skill are accepted. James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I agree, and am still reeling at the thought of anyone trying to improve Martie's free verse. It's kind of like telling Bocelli he hit a few flat notes. Loved the poem Liz |
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tom Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 90s/w penna u.s.a. |
Thats what i would of said if i said that. |
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BluesforNarada Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 13 |
A true piece of epic writing. This has really touched my heart. Keep up the good work. |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
Thank you thank you You could not have said that any better.Bals,I wonder if some people really understand the definition of sensitivity.I love what marge said |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Balladeer, I agree with your inspiration. I understand that we post in the open for ourselves and our friends. I will state for myself that I do not mind a little critical review. I am, afterall, interested in improving myself. I have also learned over the years not to be threatened by others opinions. I evaluate what they have to say. If a point is made, I learn. If I don't agree, I disregard. I like to think I have a thick skin but a soft heart. I also agree that there are many ways to say the same thing. In writing responses, we all need to be sensitive to our fellow poets. It takes courage to put your finest work our for others to read. It places you at risk...of hurt. So, my fellow poets, make your point but be kind to each other, as you would want us to be with you. INclan |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Just yesterday my husband told me that I should by books on how to write poems. I was saddened by his suggestion, because I write for me,in an attempt to get rid of the pain. Oh well I'm just glad that I'm not the only one who thinks this way and I thank you for putting it here for us. take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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